写作注意事项
1. 请大家务必要记得使用关联词。可用的关联词有:
first 首先 next 接下来 then 然后 after that 之后 finally/ at last 最后
last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的
as for 至于说到… besides 除此之外 at the same time 同时 in a word/ in conclusion/ to sum up 总之 by the way, 顺便说一句
(al)though 尽管, for this reason 因此
注意:所有这些关联词都应该大写,另起一句。
2. 注意整篇文章有比较自然的开头和结尾,如:
开头: Let me tell you something about… / I’d like to tell you about…
结尾: How/ What about you? Can you tell me?
I hope you can have a trip in…
What’s your dream job?
3. 注意格式
写信或留言条:Dear …,
………………………………………………………………………… 信:Best wishes. / 留言条: Thank you.
Yours, …
日记:Monday, January 17 Fine ………………………………………………………………………………….
4. 下面根据不同的内容提示大家文章主体部分写作注意事项
游记:( 1 ) 先说明时间和事件,如:(某天) was a fine day. … went to…
( 2 ) 对所去的地方做一个大概的介绍,如:
It is the biggest… in…
It is a great place of interest in China.
It is one of the most famous… in the world.
It is well-known because it is beautiful and has a long history.
It is a tourist attraction.
It is a good place to go sightseeing.
( 3 ) 说明如何去的及花费时间,如:We went there on foot/ by bike/ by bus… It took
us…( 时间 )。
( 4 ) 有层次地介绍活动内容,可按时间顺序、空间顺序,或分别描述不同的人所
做的不同的事,如:
时间顺序:Early in the morning, we met/ gathered at school at 6: 30. Then, we
started off at 7:00.
As soon as we arrived there, we started to…
At noon, we had a picnic/ had a big lunch.
Then, in the afternoon, we played games/ had a party there. We had
fun telling jokes and stories. / We sang and danced happily.
Time passed quickly.
At last, we…
On the first day, … On the following days, …
空间顺序:At the foot of the hill, we…
After that, we began to climb the hill.
On the way, we enjoyed the charming view.
Soon we reached the top of the hill, where we took many beautiful
photos.
分别描述:Some students swam in the sea, while others lay on the beach. … ( 5 ) 在介绍活动内容的过程中,穿插自己的收获,如:We learned a lot. ( 6 ) 总结活动感受,如:We had a good/ wonderful time on the trip.
We had a really great trip.
I really enjoyed the trip.
What a nice day! / What an unforgettable trip!
I will never forget it!
That was really an exciting experience.
This is the most unforgettable experience I have ever had. I hope our class have more activities like this.
人物小传:( 1 ) 先对人物进行总体说明,如:… is a famous… / My favorite… is… ( 2 ) 介绍生日,如:He was born on October 18, 1975/ in London, England. ( 3 ) 介绍其取得成就的奋斗过程,如:He started… / first… when he was…
years old.
In (某年), he joined the national team. He won the championship/ won first
prize/ became the champion at the age
of…
( 4 ) 再次对人物进行评价,如:He was one of the greatest…
( 5 ) 谈自己的感想,如:We are all proud of him.
I like/ admire him very much.
理想决心愿望计划:( 1 ) 先交代背景,如:Everyone has his own dream job. Let me tell you
about mine. When I grow up, I’m going to do
what I want to do.
The winter vacation is coming.
( 2 ) 表明李想决心愿望计划是什么,如:
I’m going to…
I want/ plan/ hope/ decide to…
I’d like to do something useful.
( 3 ) 介绍理由,如:I like…
I’m not good at math, so I’m going to spend
more time on math.
( 4 ) 说明现在和未来所做的努力,如:I work very hard. I… every day.
I often…
I will try my best to learn a lot
about…
( 5 ) 总结,如:I think my dream will come true.
I believe I can…
I’m fully sure I will…
I think I’m going to have a meaningful vacation.
留言条:( 1 ) 先说明事件,如:I am going to London with my parents for the holidays.
Could you please take care of my dog for me?
( 2 ) 具体说明需要对方做什么,如:Could you do these things every day? … ( 3 ) 重要提醒,如:Don’t forget to…
介绍周边场所:( 1 ) 先说明周边环境给自己要介绍的场所,如:There are three fast food
restaurants near our
school. Of all the three,
I like… best.
( 2 ) 陈述理由, 如:It has the best food and friendliest service.
The price of it is lower.
5. 注意在文章中加入一些经典表达,如:You are never too young to start doing things.
自古英雄出少年。
You are never too old to learn.
活到老学到老。
Haste makes waste.
欲速则不达。
6. 介绍一些表达观点时的可用句式:
It is obvious that… 很明显……
In my opinion, … 我认为……
Everyone know that… 每个人都知道……
The main reason why I… is that… 我……的主要原因是……
写作注意事项
1. 请大家务必要记得使用关联词。可用的关联词有:
first 首先 next 接下来 then 然后 after that 之后 finally/ at last 最后
last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的
as for 至于说到… besides 除此之外 at the same time 同时 in a word/ in conclusion/ to sum up 总之 by the way, 顺便说一句
(al)though 尽管, for this reason 因此
注意:所有这些关联词都应该大写,另起一句。
2. 注意整篇文章有比较自然的开头和结尾,如:
开头: Let me tell you something about… / I’d like to tell you about…
结尾: How/ What about you? Can you tell me?
I hope you can have a trip in…
What’s your dream job?
3. 注意格式
写信或留言条:Dear …,
………………………………………………………………………… 信:Best wishes. / 留言条: Thank you.
Yours, …
日记:Monday, January 17 Fine ………………………………………………………………………………….
4. 下面根据不同的内容提示大家文章主体部分写作注意事项
游记:( 1 ) 先说明时间和事件,如:(某天) was a fine day. … went to…
( 2 ) 对所去的地方做一个大概的介绍,如:
It is the biggest… in…
It is a great place of interest in China.
It is one of the most famous… in the world.
It is well-known because it is beautiful and has a long history.
It is a tourist attraction.
It is a good place to go sightseeing.
( 3 ) 说明如何去的及花费时间,如:We went there on foot/ by bike/ by bus… It took
us…( 时间 )。
( 4 ) 有层次地介绍活动内容,可按时间顺序、空间顺序,或分别描述不同的人所
做的不同的事,如:
时间顺序:Early in the morning, we met/ gathered at school at 6: 30. Then, we
started off at 7:00.
As soon as we arrived there, we started to…
At noon, we had a picnic/ had a big lunch.
Then, in the afternoon, we played games/ had a party there. We had
fun telling jokes and stories. / We sang and danced happily.
Time passed quickly.
At last, we…
On the first day, … On the following days, …
空间顺序:At the foot of the hill, we…
After that, we began to climb the hill.
On the way, we enjoyed the charming view.
Soon we reached the top of the hill, where we took many beautiful
photos.
分别描述:Some students swam in the sea, while others lay on the beach. … ( 5 ) 在介绍活动内容的过程中,穿插自己的收获,如:We learned a lot. ( 6 ) 总结活动感受,如:We had a good/ wonderful time on the trip.
We had a really great trip.
I really enjoyed the trip.
What a nice day! / What an unforgettable trip!
I will never forget it!
That was really an exciting experience.
This is the most unforgettable experience I have ever had. I hope our class have more activities like this.
人物小传:( 1 ) 先对人物进行总体说明,如:… is a famous… / My favorite… is… ( 2 ) 介绍生日,如:He was born on October 18, 1975/ in London, England. ( 3 ) 介绍其取得成就的奋斗过程,如:He started… / first… when he was…
years old.
In (某年), he joined the national team. He won the championship/ won first
prize/ became the champion at the age
of…
( 4 ) 再次对人物进行评价,如:He was one of the greatest…
( 5 ) 谈自己的感想,如:We are all proud of him.
I like/ admire him very much.
理想决心愿望计划:( 1 ) 先交代背景,如:Everyone has his own dream job. Let me tell you
about mine. When I grow up, I’m going to do
what I want to do.
The winter vacation is coming.
( 2 ) 表明李想决心愿望计划是什么,如:
I’m going to…
I want/ plan/ hope/ decide to…
I’d like to do something useful.
( 3 ) 介绍理由,如:I like…
I’m not good at math, so I’m going to spend
more time on math.
( 4 ) 说明现在和未来所做的努力,如:I work very hard. I… every day.
I often…
I will try my best to learn a lot
about…
( 5 ) 总结,如:I think my dream will come true.
I believe I can…
I’m fully sure I will…
I think I’m going to have a meaningful vacation.
留言条:( 1 ) 先说明事件,如:I am going to London with my parents for the holidays.
Could you please take care of my dog for me?
( 2 ) 具体说明需要对方做什么,如:Could you do these things every day? … ( 3 ) 重要提醒,如:Don’t forget to…
介绍周边场所:( 1 ) 先说明周边环境给自己要介绍的场所,如:There are three fast food
restaurants near our
school. Of all the three,
I like… best.
( 2 ) 陈述理由, 如:It has the best food and friendliest service.
The price of it is lower.
5. 注意在文章中加入一些经典表达,如:You are never too young to start doing things.
自古英雄出少年。
You are never too old to learn.
活到老学到老。
Haste makes waste.
欲速则不达。
6. 介绍一些表达观点时的可用句式:
It is obvious that… 很明显……
In my opinion, … 我认为……
Everyone know that… 每个人都知道……
The main reason why I… is that… 我……的主要原因是……