写作
3段10句话
十大高频词汇的替换:
认为:think
contend,advocate,convict,deem,
be convinced,hold the opinion that
人们:people(persons)
individuals,citizens,characters,folks
很,非常:very
dramatically,considerably,enormously,tremendously,remarkab ly
extraordinarily,extremely,exceedingly (程度更强) 重要的:important
significant,crucial,essential,vital,imperative 喜欢:like
be fond of,fall in love with
prefer,be crazy/enthusiastic about
许多:many
a good/great many
a(n) sea/ocean of
an army of,a host of
不同的:different
various/a variety of,distinctive,separate,diverse 好的:good
positive,desirable,advantageous,favourable,beneficial 坏的:bad
negative,undesirable,disadvantageous
evil,discouraging
越来越多的:more and more +n.
an+increasing number/amount of+n.
a+very的替换+increasing number of+n.
increasing=growing,rising
正反对比类:A or –A
对同一问题先后列出甲,乙两方相反观点及其理由,然后要求亮明你自己的观点
三段:
1, 引入话题+甲方观点+理由
2, 乙方观点+理由
3, 你自己的观点+理由+结束句
全文结构:4-3-3
开头方式:
引入话题:三种方式
1, 话题式:话题是关于……
最近人们正在谈论的所有流行话题中,最热门的话题之一是关于……
的
Among all the popular issues that individuals are talking about recently,one of the hottest is about ……
about 后的词往往来自英文标题中的n. 且在下面的中文提纲中出现频率最高
2, 问句式
我们应该如何做……?
How should we do……?
对待,应对,处理……
treat/handle/deal with/cope with
看待,认识,考虑……
consider/regard
3, 关注式
如何做……已经成为了一件我们大学生关注的事情。
How we should do ……has become a matter of concern for college students.
各方提出观点:
我们发现一些人认为……
We find some citizens hold the opinion that(甲方观点) find=discover,disclose,detect,ascertain
opinion=view,viewpoint,idea,statement,conviction,assertion 其他人支持相反的观点
Others are in favor of the opposite one that (乙方观点) be in faver of可替换为
support,agree to,prefer,approve of,be opposed to,be against 为使语句连贯,在第二个观点前
1, 加上表转折逻辑关系的词
but 可换做
However, ……
Nevertheless, ……
Nonetheless, ……
2, 内容上相反的词
与之相反
On the contrary,……
By contrast,……
By comparison,……
Unlike it,……
3, 时间状语,与此同时
At the same time,……
Meamwhile, ……
Simultaneously, ……
句式的基本变化
1, 被动
2, 主系表
(宾语)是(重要的,必要的)
necessary,significant,crucial,essential,vital,imperative 提出我的观点
In my opinion/view,……
From my poin of view,……
As far as I am concerned,……
就我而言,……
When it comes to me,……
就我而言,选择前者/后者而不是选择相反的那个是更明智的。When it comes to me,it is more advisable to choose former/the latter,rather than the opposite one.
更合适,更适当
suitable,proper
appropriate
更合理
reasonable,sound,logic
更聪明,更明智
intelligent,advisable,sensible,rational
阐述理由时注意逻辑和层次
两点论(有两个理由):
On one hand,……On the other,……
For one thing,……For another,…… the
From one aspect,……From another,……
一点论(一个理由) :
The main/chief/major/fundamental reason is that …… 万能理由:
……给经济发展施加了很好/很坏的影响。
……exerts a dramatically desirable/discouraging influence on economic development.
……在经济发展上起了很大/很小的作用。
……performs a dramatically great/little function in economic development.
great=large,huge,vast
little=slight
……对我们的环境有破坏性/灾难性的影响。
……exerts a destructive/disastrous influence on our environment/circumstance/surroundings.
它将帮助我探索新的知识。
It will promote me to explore new knowledge.
帮助
assist,push,encourage,promote,enhance,spur,facilitate,adva nce,boost
开拓眼界
widen our horizon
我们可以对这个世界获得一个更好的理解。
We can acquire a better understanding of this world. 获得
get,acquire,achieve,obtain,gain
在这样的情况下,我们发现专注于学习很困难,而且我在学业上越拉越远。
We find it difficult to concentrate on our studies,and I am falling behind my assignments under these circumstances. 塑造我们的性格
shape our personality
发展我们的人际交往能力
develop/improve our interpersonal skills
万能大废话(什么话题都能用):
……已经成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分了。
……has become an essential part in our daily life. 随着时间的推移,它将显示出更加深远的意义。
With the passage of time,it will show more profound and far-reaching significance.
从长期来看,这必然是构建和谐社会的基础。
It must be the basis of establishing a harmonious society in the long tern.
结尾句:
考虑所有这些因素,……
Taking all these factors/elements into account/consideration,……
基于上面提到的这个分析,……
Based on the analysis mentioned above,……
我坚定地认为这时一个明智的选择。
I contend firmly it is an advisable choice.
历年真题:06年12月,09年6月
个人观点:
在若干个选项中,选择一个适合你的并提出理由。
三段:
1, 描述相关现象
2, 列举出多项选择(列三个)
3, 你的选择
全文结构:3-4-3
第一段:
问句式:
对提问的回答,三类
1, 对待这个话题的态度往往差别很大。
Attitude towards the issue often greatly/sharply/widely. 2, 这个问题的答案经常在人和人之间各不相同。
Answers to this question usually vary from person to person.
3, 对待这个问题的不同态度渐渐的浮现了出来。Gradually,distinctive attitudes emerge towards the issue. 话题式+问句式:1+2
关注式+问句式:1+2
第二段:
一个引出句+三个选项
引出的话:
这个现象或许涉及到一下几个因素。
The phenomenon may involve several factors as follow. 列出三种选项。
1. We find sone citizens hold the opinion that (主谓宾)
2. Simultaneously,some others prefer the distinctive one that (被动)
3. The rest of them contend that (主系表)
第三段:
第一句:做出自己的选择
第二句:说明理由(1-2句)
第三句:结尾句
When it comes to me,it is more advisable to choose the first one/the second one/the last one,rather than others/other two. 历年真题:07年12月
社会热点:
介绍一种关注度高的社会现象,并围绕其进行分析和讨论。 三段:
1, 描述现象
2, 揭示影响(好处或危害)
3, 具体措施
全文结构:3-3-4
第一段:
第一句:
话题式或关注式,不能用问句式
第二句:第一条原因,第三句:第二条原因
或
第二句:引出句,第三句:一条最重要的原因
引出句:
1, The phenomenon may involve several factors.
2, 这种现象为什么会发生?
Why does the phenomenon take place/happen/occur/appear/exist? 原因:
好事;
知识,性格,人际交往
经济发展,和谐社会……
坏事;
知识,环境,和谐社会……
名利
The fundament reason is that they did this for 名利。 名(名誉,名声,名望,名气) :
honor,reputation,fame,renown
利(利益,利润,经济回报):
money,wealth,fortune,treasure,interest,profit,benefits,rew ards
第二段:
第一句(引出句):
……不仅对个人,而且丢整个社会起着好/坏(大/小)的作用。 ……performs a dramatically great function not only in individuals in their personal life,but in the society as a whole.
第二三句;具体影响
万能理由
第三段:
解决措施+结尾句(3+1)
解决措施=1个引出句+2条具体措施
解决措施(负)
解决问题,
solve/resolve/tackle/figure out problem
扭转趋势,
reverse/transform
situation/condition/trend/tide/tendency/change
To solve this problem,……
To reverse this situation,……
To crack the hard nut,……
采取一些有效的措施是很重要的。
it is significant to adopt some extraordinarily effective and efficient measures.
具体措施:
第一条,
一方面,我们可以呼吁相关部门制定严厉的法律法规来惩罚做……的人。
From one aspect,we can appeal to institutions concerned to set down strict laws and regulations to punish those who do ……
第二条,
另一方面,公众应该具有……的认识。
From another,the public should keep the realization that …… 解决措施(正)
Based on the analysis mentioned above,
Taking all these factors into account,
we may safely/reasonably draw a conclusion that…… 具体措施:
1, 认识到……的重要性对于我们是重要的。
It is indispensable for us to realize the significance of…… 2, 从今往后,我下定决心,在每次向目标尝试时尽我最大努力去
做……
From now on,I determine to spare no effort to do ……in every attmpt towards our goals.
结尾句:
当所有的措施被认真执行时,一个光明的未来就正在等着我们。
A bright future is awaiting us when all the measures are taken seriously/carefully/responsibly.
历年真题:08年12月,09年12月
还有书信没有总结,回过几天发给你。我那套新东方的模拟题是去年的,我再问问同学今年的作文预测的是什么吧。
写作
3段10句话
十大高频词汇的替换:
认为:think
contend,advocate,convict,deem,
be convinced,hold the opinion that
人们:people(persons)
individuals,citizens,characters,folks
很,非常:very
dramatically,considerably,enormously,tremendously,remarkab ly
extraordinarily,extremely,exceedingly (程度更强) 重要的:important
significant,crucial,essential,vital,imperative 喜欢:like
be fond of,fall in love with
prefer,be crazy/enthusiastic about
许多:many
a good/great many
a(n) sea/ocean of
an army of,a host of
不同的:different
various/a variety of,distinctive,separate,diverse 好的:good
positive,desirable,advantageous,favourable,beneficial 坏的:bad
negative,undesirable,disadvantageous
evil,discouraging
越来越多的:more and more +n.
an+increasing number/amount of+n.
a+very的替换+increasing number of+n.
increasing=growing,rising
正反对比类:A or –A
对同一问题先后列出甲,乙两方相反观点及其理由,然后要求亮明你自己的观点
三段:
1, 引入话题+甲方观点+理由
2, 乙方观点+理由
3, 你自己的观点+理由+结束句
全文结构:4-3-3
开头方式:
引入话题:三种方式
1, 话题式:话题是关于……
最近人们正在谈论的所有流行话题中,最热门的话题之一是关于……
的
Among all the popular issues that individuals are talking about recently,one of the hottest is about ……
about 后的词往往来自英文标题中的n. 且在下面的中文提纲中出现频率最高
2, 问句式
我们应该如何做……?
How should we do……?
对待,应对,处理……
treat/handle/deal with/cope with
看待,认识,考虑……
consider/regard
3, 关注式
如何做……已经成为了一件我们大学生关注的事情。
How we should do ……has become a matter of concern for college students.
各方提出观点:
我们发现一些人认为……
We find some citizens hold the opinion that(甲方观点) find=discover,disclose,detect,ascertain
opinion=view,viewpoint,idea,statement,conviction,assertion 其他人支持相反的观点
Others are in favor of the opposite one that (乙方观点) be in faver of可替换为
support,agree to,prefer,approve of,be opposed to,be against 为使语句连贯,在第二个观点前
1, 加上表转折逻辑关系的词
but 可换做
However, ……
Nevertheless, ……
Nonetheless, ……
2, 内容上相反的词
与之相反
On the contrary,……
By contrast,……
By comparison,……
Unlike it,……
3, 时间状语,与此同时
At the same time,……
Meamwhile, ……
Simultaneously, ……
句式的基本变化
1, 被动
2, 主系表
(宾语)是(重要的,必要的)
necessary,significant,crucial,essential,vital,imperative 提出我的观点
In my opinion/view,……
From my poin of view,……
As far as I am concerned,……
就我而言,……
When it comes to me,……
就我而言,选择前者/后者而不是选择相反的那个是更明智的。When it comes to me,it is more advisable to choose former/the latter,rather than the opposite one.
更合适,更适当
suitable,proper
appropriate
更合理
reasonable,sound,logic
更聪明,更明智
intelligent,advisable,sensible,rational
阐述理由时注意逻辑和层次
两点论(有两个理由):
On one hand,……On the other,……
For one thing,……For another,…… the
From one aspect,……From another,……
一点论(一个理由) :
The main/chief/major/fundamental reason is that …… 万能理由:
……给经济发展施加了很好/很坏的影响。
……exerts a dramatically desirable/discouraging influence on economic development.
……在经济发展上起了很大/很小的作用。
……performs a dramatically great/little function in economic development.
great=large,huge,vast
little=slight
……对我们的环境有破坏性/灾难性的影响。
……exerts a destructive/disastrous influence on our environment/circumstance/surroundings.
它将帮助我探索新的知识。
It will promote me to explore new knowledge.
帮助
assist,push,encourage,promote,enhance,spur,facilitate,adva nce,boost
开拓眼界
widen our horizon
我们可以对这个世界获得一个更好的理解。
We can acquire a better understanding of this world. 获得
get,acquire,achieve,obtain,gain
在这样的情况下,我们发现专注于学习很困难,而且我在学业上越拉越远。
We find it difficult to concentrate on our studies,and I am falling behind my assignments under these circumstances. 塑造我们的性格
shape our personality
发展我们的人际交往能力
develop/improve our interpersonal skills
万能大废话(什么话题都能用):
……已经成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分了。
……has become an essential part in our daily life. 随着时间的推移,它将显示出更加深远的意义。
With the passage of time,it will show more profound and far-reaching significance.
从长期来看,这必然是构建和谐社会的基础。
It must be the basis of establishing a harmonious society in the long tern.
结尾句:
考虑所有这些因素,……
Taking all these factors/elements into account/consideration,……
基于上面提到的这个分析,……
Based on the analysis mentioned above,……
我坚定地认为这时一个明智的选择。
I contend firmly it is an advisable choice.
历年真题:06年12月,09年6月
个人观点:
在若干个选项中,选择一个适合你的并提出理由。
三段:
1, 描述相关现象
2, 列举出多项选择(列三个)
3, 你的选择
全文结构:3-4-3
第一段:
问句式:
对提问的回答,三类
1, 对待这个话题的态度往往差别很大。
Attitude towards the issue often greatly/sharply/widely. 2, 这个问题的答案经常在人和人之间各不相同。
Answers to this question usually vary from person to person.
3, 对待这个问题的不同态度渐渐的浮现了出来。Gradually,distinctive attitudes emerge towards the issue. 话题式+问句式:1+2
关注式+问句式:1+2
第二段:
一个引出句+三个选项
引出的话:
这个现象或许涉及到一下几个因素。
The phenomenon may involve several factors as follow. 列出三种选项。
1. We find sone citizens hold the opinion that (主谓宾)
2. Simultaneously,some others prefer the distinctive one that (被动)
3. The rest of them contend that (主系表)
第三段:
第一句:做出自己的选择
第二句:说明理由(1-2句)
第三句:结尾句
When it comes to me,it is more advisable to choose the first one/the second one/the last one,rather than others/other two. 历年真题:07年12月
社会热点:
介绍一种关注度高的社会现象,并围绕其进行分析和讨论。 三段:
1, 描述现象
2, 揭示影响(好处或危害)
3, 具体措施
全文结构:3-3-4
第一段:
第一句:
话题式或关注式,不能用问句式
第二句:第一条原因,第三句:第二条原因
或
第二句:引出句,第三句:一条最重要的原因
引出句:
1, The phenomenon may involve several factors.
2, 这种现象为什么会发生?
Why does the phenomenon take place/happen/occur/appear/exist? 原因:
好事;
知识,性格,人际交往
经济发展,和谐社会……
坏事;
知识,环境,和谐社会……
名利
The fundament reason is that they did this for 名利。 名(名誉,名声,名望,名气) :
honor,reputation,fame,renown
利(利益,利润,经济回报):
money,wealth,fortune,treasure,interest,profit,benefits,rew ards
第二段:
第一句(引出句):
……不仅对个人,而且丢整个社会起着好/坏(大/小)的作用。 ……performs a dramatically great function not only in individuals in their personal life,but in the society as a whole.
第二三句;具体影响
万能理由
第三段:
解决措施+结尾句(3+1)
解决措施=1个引出句+2条具体措施
解决措施(负)
解决问题,
solve/resolve/tackle/figure out problem
扭转趋势,
reverse/transform
situation/condition/trend/tide/tendency/change
To solve this problem,……
To reverse this situation,……
To crack the hard nut,……
采取一些有效的措施是很重要的。
it is significant to adopt some extraordinarily effective and efficient measures.
具体措施:
第一条,
一方面,我们可以呼吁相关部门制定严厉的法律法规来惩罚做……的人。
From one aspect,we can appeal to institutions concerned to set down strict laws and regulations to punish those who do ……
第二条,
另一方面,公众应该具有……的认识。
From another,the public should keep the realization that …… 解决措施(正)
Based on the analysis mentioned above,
Taking all these factors into account,
we may safely/reasonably draw a conclusion that…… 具体措施:
1, 认识到……的重要性对于我们是重要的。
It is indispensable for us to realize the significance of…… 2, 从今往后,我下定决心,在每次向目标尝试时尽我最大努力去
做……
From now on,I determine to spare no effort to do ……in every attmpt towards our goals.
结尾句:
当所有的措施被认真执行时,一个光明的未来就正在等着我们。
A bright future is awaiting us when all the measures are taken seriously/carefully/responsibly.
历年真题:08年12月,09年12月
还有书信没有总结,回过几天发给你。我那套新东方的模拟题是去年的,我再问问同学今年的作文预测的是什么吧。