一、 图表作文的结构
图表变化类用语:图表作文要求学生从表格或图片出发,通常分为三个步骤
第一步:对表格或图表进行叙述 常用句型为 : As the pie chart shows, / As can be seen from the pie chart,
第二步:对表格或图表进行成因的分析
主题句+ 原因1 + 原因2 + 原因3。主题句为:There are several factors
contributing to _______. 原因1________. The second reason is that _______原因2.
Furthermore, 原因3__________. All these result in _________.
第三步:个人观点或解决问题的办法
主题句+ 建议或个人观点+ 前景的预测或愿望
However, ________ is faced with some problems. With _______, the influence of
which is not only discouraging us , but also challenging us. As for us, my principle is
to pay due attention to_______, but not just to ________.
参考模板一:
Th e chart gives us an overall picture of the ________(图表主题) . The first thing we notice is that ______(图表最大特点). This means that as ________(进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that ________(图表细节一). After v—ing (细节中的第 一个变化), the ________ V—ed + 幅度 + 时间. The figures also tell us that ________ (图表细节二). (数据位置, 如 In the column), we can see that _______ accounts for _________ Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that _______ (结论). The reason for this , as far as I am concerned, is that _______ (给出原因)/ It is a high time that we did_______ (发表建议)
参考模板二:
As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure / percentage in the table / graph / picture / pie chart, ______ (作文题目) _____has been on rise / decreases / goes up / increases / drops, significantly / steadily rising / decreasing from _____ in _____ to ______ in _____ . From the sharp rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two / three good reasons accounting for _______. To begin with, ______ . what’s more, ______ is due to the fact that _______. In addition, _____is responsible for ______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _______. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
In my opinion , I hold the view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and
well-grounded.
二、漫画作文3段式:
1. 描述基本步骤:描述漫画、图表——引出暗含主题——简短解释——过渡
参考句型:
From the cartoon we can see that_____. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today's society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____.
2. 阐明原因基本步骤:引出原因——列举原因——过渡
参考句型:
What caused the effect? There are at least two/three possible reasons accounting for this problem. To begin with,_____. In the second place,_____. There may be some other reasons responsible for___, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable.
3. 提出对策基本步骤:引出对策——列举对策——过渡
参考模板一:
We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. First of all, the government should propagandize 进行宣传to arouse public awareness of_____. In the second place, the government should take effective measures to_____. Finally, _____ should be banned by law. Only in this way can we do…..
参考模板二:
This illustration depicts ________图画中的人物 Ving, which _______ (补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to ________(进一步阐明) It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about ________ 图画主题, which is
______ 进一步的说明. He seems to be saying that ________ 给出细节. In my opinion, _______ (个人阐述).
This simple picture is a wake up call for _______(所涉群体), 如:_______ . Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measure to put an end to _______ (问题所在). On the one hand, we must ________(建议一). On the other hand, ________ (建议二) . Only in this way can we ________(展望未来)
As is vividly portrayed in the picture, a teenage boy is busy chatting online. He enjoys it so much as to ignore his mum, who is just standing nearby. Her unhappy expression_r_r_r suggests that she hopes for a chance to have a chat with her son. Actually, what’s portrayed in the caricature is a common phenomenon both at home and abroad.
Why do many teenagers choose to communicate with net friends rather than people in real life, even their own parents. That ’s mainly because chatting online is much fun and kids can make new friends with people across the world. However, nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how interesting it is.
Parents are those who feed, clothe, shelter and support us. How ridiculous it sounds to refuse to speak to them! As teenagers, we should spend more time with parents, and keep them informed of what ’s happening to us. Especially when in trouble, we should turn to our parents for advice. Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about. By doing so, we can surely develop a better relationship with parents.
一、 图表作文的结构
图表变化类用语:图表作文要求学生从表格或图片出发,通常分为三个步骤
第一步:对表格或图表进行叙述 常用句型为 : As the pie chart shows, / As can be seen from the pie chart,
第二步:对表格或图表进行成因的分析
主题句+ 原因1 + 原因2 + 原因3。主题句为:There are several factors
contributing to _______. 原因1________. The second reason is that _______原因2.
Furthermore, 原因3__________. All these result in _________.
第三步:个人观点或解决问题的办法
主题句+ 建议或个人观点+ 前景的预测或愿望
However, ________ is faced with some problems. With _______, the influence of
which is not only discouraging us , but also challenging us. As for us, my principle is
to pay due attention to_______, but not just to ________.
参考模板一:
Th e chart gives us an overall picture of the ________(图表主题) . The first thing we notice is that ______(图表最大特点). This means that as ________(进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that ________(图表细节一). After v—ing (细节中的第 一个变化), the ________ V—ed + 幅度 + 时间. The figures also tell us that ________ (图表细节二). (数据位置, 如 In the column), we can see that _______ accounts for _________ Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that _______ (结论). The reason for this , as far as I am concerned, is that _______ (给出原因)/ It is a high time that we did_______ (发表建议)
参考模板二:
As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure / percentage in the table / graph / picture / pie chart, ______ (作文题目) _____has been on rise / decreases / goes up / increases / drops, significantly / steadily rising / decreasing from _____ in _____ to ______ in _____ . From the sharp rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two / three good reasons accounting for _______. To begin with, ______ . what’s more, ______ is due to the fact that _______. In addition, _____is responsible for ______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _______. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
In my opinion , I hold the view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and
well-grounded.
二、漫画作文3段式:
1. 描述基本步骤:描述漫画、图表——引出暗含主题——简短解释——过渡
参考句型:
From the cartoon we can see that_____. What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today's society, and it conveys the symbolic meaning of_____.
2. 阐明原因基本步骤:引出原因——列举原因——过渡
参考句型:
What caused the effect? There are at least two/three possible reasons accounting for this problem. To begin with,_____. In the second place,_____. There may be some other reasons responsible for___, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable.
3. 提出对策基本步骤:引出对策——列举对策——过渡
参考模板一:
We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. First of all, the government should propagandize 进行宣传to arouse public awareness of_____. In the second place, the government should take effective measures to_____. Finally, _____ should be banned by law. Only in this way can we do…..
参考模板二:
This illustration depicts ________图画中的人物 Ving, which _______ (补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to ________(进一步阐明) It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about ________ 图画主题, which is
______ 进一步的说明. He seems to be saying that ________ 给出细节. In my opinion, _______ (个人阐述).
This simple picture is a wake up call for _______(所涉群体), 如:_______ . Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measure to put an end to _______ (问题所在). On the one hand, we must ________(建议一). On the other hand, ________ (建议二) . Only in this way can we ________(展望未来)
As is vividly portrayed in the picture, a teenage boy is busy chatting online. He enjoys it so much as to ignore his mum, who is just standing nearby. Her unhappy expression_r_r_r suggests that she hopes for a chance to have a chat with her son. Actually, what’s portrayed in the caricature is a common phenomenon both at home and abroad.
Why do many teenagers choose to communicate with net friends rather than people in real life, even their own parents. That ’s mainly because chatting online is much fun and kids can make new friends with people across the world. However, nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how interesting it is.
Parents are those who feed, clothe, shelter and support us. How ridiculous it sounds to refuse to speak to them! As teenagers, we should spend more time with parents, and keep them informed of what ’s happening to us. Especially when in trouble, we should turn to our parents for advice. Interesting topics are recommended so that both parents and teenagers love to talk about. By doing so, we can surely develop a better relationship with parents.