5.图表作文范例
1. Post-School Qualifications
347,500 Australians aged between 25 and 34 hold 104,800 55-69 year-olds hold a degree. a degree. Their main fields of study were {%): Their main fields of study were (%):
Education H.76
Veterina
These two pie charts show the differences between two groups of 导言总体介绍图表情况 Australians (25 to 34 and 55 to 69 years old) in terms of their post-school qualifications.
The younger group is more than three times bigger than compared to 104,800）.
Comparing the two groups, architecture and medicine have experienced a decrease in popularity with younger graduates; medicine declined by almost 4%. However, biggest loss was to engineering, which decreased from 19.27% to 9.35% of the whole. Some subjects were more popular with the younger age group. The biggest gains in increased by over 8% . Administration has gained by 4.1% .
noticeable change in subject percentages is the decrease in the number of graduates. (Adapted from Prepare for IELTS : Academic Modules P115)
The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three
periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
大作文范文
题目 1：Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文：
第一段： 社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点
Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion of fossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals are convinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand of humans toward energy. After serious
consideration, I deem it is not only conducive to sound development of
environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. . 第二段：支持观点
论点：核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证：矿物燃料危害+结论：核能势必优先发展
To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role in promoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human beings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental
situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming that triggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industries and agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources. 第三段：支持观点
论点：核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证：石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题
In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energetic motivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain.
Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oil resources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However，Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources . 第四段：让步段
另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳
另一种观点：核能带来致命危害+和平隐患 对此反驳：双边多边合作解决
此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密相连
Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as
nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilized by various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry, especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closely related to economic and social development of countries around the world. 第五段：总结段：总结观点+建议/倡导
To sum up, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that utilizing the nuclear energy in reasonable and valid way can play the irreversible role in improving the deteriorating survival environment and safeguarding long-term unity and stability of society. Meanwhile,
governments around the world need to increase consultation, build consensus, deepen cooperation and tackle changes of nuclear safety together.
题目2：
Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent of each other. Others think the modern world gets people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
第一段 ： 社会背景描述+正向/反向观点表达+ 自己观点
Along with the highly-developed science and technology and all-round improvement of production efficiency, modern society dominated by industrial manufacturing makes it possible to change the relation between individuals to a large extent. Therefore, some individuals deem that people tend to increasingly depend on each other. Others, nevertheless, including me, are convinced that modern society makes people become more independent of each other than ever before, given changes of working environments and individual values. 第二段：外因+例证
To begin with, the increasing complexity of working environments resulting from modern society gives rise to more independence of individuals. For example, huge pressures, fierce competitions and detailed and specific division of labor in modern society need people to accomplish relevant jobs more independently of each other in spite of existing collaboration with each other. Hence, dedicating more time and energy into their own work means reducing the time devoted to working by relying on others. From this point, the increasing independence of people living in modern society is the irreversible tendency of the society.
第三段：内因+例证
In addition, the great changes of individual values evoked by modern society makes people turn out to be more independent. To be better qualified for work and stand out from the crowds , a growing number of individuals are inclined to more emphasizing on the comprehensive improvement of skills instead of seeking and relying on assistance from outside and from others, tackling numerous and complicated issues that they are confronted with independently . 第四段：让步段 另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳
Admittedly, completion of plentiful of projects and tasks need the coordination and cooperation of team to cope with instead of merely depending on individuals, therefore, the mutual reliance between people becomes more intensified. However, the cooperation is based on the efforts of independent individuals in possession of relevant skills and qualifications, that is to say, the dependence of the individuals is the vital key to impacting collaboration. Undeniably, the independence of individuals required by the current society is more prominent than dependence of each other.
第五段： 总结全文 +提出建议
On balance, after summarizing the outlined perspectives above, I am convinced that complexity of working environments and changes of individual values in the modern society lead to more independence among people, which is also the essential characteristic required by developments of the current society , meanwhile, confronting with the arduous and complicated tasks could enhance mutual collaboration further.
5.图表作文范例
1. Post-School Qualifications
347,500 Australians aged between 25 and 34 hold 104,800 55-69 year-olds hold a degree. a degree. Their main fields of study were {%): Their main fields of study were (%):
Education H.76
Veterina
These two pie charts show the differences between two groups of 导言总体介绍图表情况 Australians (25 to 34 and 55 to 69 years old) in terms of their post-school qualifications.
The younger group is more than three times bigger than compared to 104,800）.
Comparing the two groups, architecture and medicine have experienced a decrease in popularity with younger graduates; medicine declined by almost 4%. However, biggest loss was to engineering, which decreased from 19.27% to 9.35% of the whole. Some subjects were more popular with the younger age group. The biggest gains in increased by over 8% . Administration has gained by 4.1% .
noticeable change in subject percentages is the decrease in the number of graduates. (Adapted from Prepare for IELTS : Academic Modules P115)
The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three
periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
大作文范文
题目 1：Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 范文：
第一段： 社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点
Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion of fossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals are convinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand of humans toward energy. After serious
consideration, I deem it is not only conducive to sound development of
environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. . 第二段：支持观点
论点：核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证：矿物燃料危害+结论：核能势必优先发展
To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role in promoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human beings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental
situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming that triggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industries and agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources. 第三段：支持观点
论点：核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证：石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题
In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energetic motivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain.
Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oil resources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However，Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources . 第四段：让步段
另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳
另一种观点：核能带来致命危害+和平隐患 对此反驳：双边多边合作解决
此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密相连
Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as
nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilized by various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry, especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closely related to economic and social development of countries around the world. 第五段：总结段：总结观点+建议/倡导
To sum up, after summarizing what is outlined above, I hold the point of view that utilizing the nuclear energy in reasonable and valid way can play the irreversible role in improving the deteriorating survival environment and safeguarding long-term unity and stability of society. Meanwhile,
governments around the world need to increase consultation, build consensus, deepen cooperation and tackle changes of nuclear safety together.
题目2：
Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent of each other. Others think the modern world gets people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
第一段 ： 社会背景描述+正向/反向观点表达+ 自己观点
Along with the highly-developed science and technology and all-round improvement of production efficiency, modern society dominated by industrial manufacturing makes it possible to change the relation between individuals to a large extent. Therefore, some individuals deem that people tend to increasingly depend on each other. Others, nevertheless, including me, are convinced that modern society makes people become more independent of each other than ever before, given changes of working environments and individual values. 第二段：外因+例证
To begin with, the increasing complexity of working environments resulting from modern society gives rise to more independence of individuals. For example, huge pressures, fierce competitions and detailed and specific division of labor in modern society need people to accomplish relevant jobs more independently of each other in spite of existing collaboration with each other. Hence, dedicating more time and energy into their own work means reducing the time devoted to working by relying on others. From this point, the increasing independence of people living in modern society is the irreversible tendency of the society.
第三段：内因+例证
In addition, the great changes of individual values evoked by modern society makes people turn out to be more independent. To be better qualified for work and stand out from the crowds , a growing number of individuals are inclined to more emphasizing on the comprehensive improvement of skills instead of seeking and relying on assistance from outside and from others, tackling numerous and complicated issues that they are confronted with independently . 第四段：让步段 另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳
Admittedly, completion of plentiful of projects and tasks need the coordination and cooperation of team to cope with instead of merely depending on individuals, therefore, the mutual reliance between people becomes more intensified. However, the cooperation is based on the efforts of independent individuals in possession of relevant skills and qualifications, that is to say, the dependence of the individuals is the vital key to impacting collaboration. Undeniably, the independence of individuals required by the current society is more prominent than dependence of each other.
第五段： 总结全文 +提出建议
On balance, after summarizing the outlined perspectives above, I am convinced that complexity of working environments and changes of individual values in the modern society lead to more independence among people, which is also the essential characteristic required by developments of the current society , meanwhile, confronting with the arduous and complicated tasks could enhance mutual collaboration further.