书面表达（二）：高二篇
提高写作方法
在高考英语书面表达中，一篇优秀作文，除了要点齐全、语言规范准确、内容连贯、行
文流畅以外，还必须在运用较为复杂结构和较高级词汇上有所表现。所以，在整篇文章中，
有意识地灵活运用复杂句式和高级词汇，不仅显示出自己扎实的英语功底，而且为文章增添
亮点，给人一种含金量高的审美享受，也就等于给了阅卷老师一个打高分的理由。
方法一: 注重文章的开始句/主题句、承转句和结尾句，它会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
problems have come into being.
help to us.
4. As an old saying goes/runs, “Honesty is the best policy.”
knowledge and broadens our mind.
13. There is no doubt/denying that education plays a big role in our life.
用于文章结论句。这种句式更能鲜明地表达出说话者的态度和观点, 给人留下一个圆满的
结局。
方法二：在整篇文章中, 要特别注重使用一些较为复杂的结构, 如非谓语动词、独立主格结构、
倒装句、强调句、虚拟句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等。
13. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the
shops, but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.
14. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
15. We could do nothing but/other than wait.
16. Given a chance, I can surprise the world.
17. Television has so many advantages. It keeps us informed about the latest news, but also
provides entertainment in the home.
以上非谓语动词的使用使句子显得更简洁，更高级，必定会获得阅卷老师较好的印象。
18. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling
my troubles away and live a better life.
19. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we care more about
nature and build a harmonious relationship with our earth.
20. Gone are the days when farmers live in the poor houses.
21. Not only should we students study hard, we also should know how to enjoy ourselves in our
spare time.
倒装句有意“打破常规”
凑、行文节奏婉转流畅。
highly of her.
()
32. I’m awfully grateful to you for taking so much trouble to help me. (Thank you for…)
方法二:注重使用短语、习语来代替某些词，使得文章具有多彩性。
33. Every coin has two sides.
34. 25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work
experience and learn more of the society. (think)
35. All work and no play make(s) Jack a dull boy.
在写作中使用一些习语、谚语和俗话使文章带有风趣性。
亮点作文
关于学习效率
No one can deny the importance of efficiency in study. It not only saves us much time which
can be spent in doing other activities, but also improves our memory and enthusiasm for study. Just
imagine how happy you are when you make full use of every minute.
Unfortunately, despite the fact, little attention is paid to it. As a result, we feel so tired and
pressured since we have spent much time on it but nothing works at last. Worse still, some of us are
discouraged and quite at a loss.
So here are some suggestions that may help. First, we should develop a habit of making a study
plan and carrying it out no matter what difficulty comes in the way. Second, doing exercise regularly
will without doubt have positive effects on studying efficiency. Just as the proverb says, all work and
no play makes Jack a dull boy. Only in this way can we study efficiently.
Secondly, „„
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jiang Ping
关于创造力
There is no denying that modern middle school students show great enthusiasm for creativity. It
without doubt makes a big difference in our life. Not only does it improve our study efficiency, but it
also develops our optimism to our life.
However, many of us feel that we are lack of creativity for different reasons. For example, the
combination of study pressure and seemingly boring lifestyle costs us the creativity in ourselves.
So it’s urgent for us to develop creativity by ourselves. The following suggestions may help.
First, find the inspiration. Many things are beautiful and inspiring such as listening to music. Second,
having time to yourself to let your mind wander is important, which may help you come up with
amazing ideas you didn't know you were capable of. Also, doing something creative can have a
positive effect on stress by giving you something relaxing to do. No one has an excuse to say they
are not creative.
根据漫画写短文。(关于尊敬老人)
’s face,
’s company, is
take it for granted that be focus of the family, who turn a blind eye to what their
As far as I ’m the should call for the attention of the whole society.
Needless to say, not only the young but also the old in our society deserve good care and enough
attention. The needs of the old shouldn ’t be ignored. In conclus ion, we shouldn’t lose the good
tradition of caring for the old.
高二必背文章
求学信/求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration. I am writing the letter in
purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position
for a staff member.
I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further
details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my
qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well
suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies
include sports and music.
Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your
prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
开幕词
Ladies and gentlemen,
attention.
通知
Directions:
The St
February 3, 2007
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’
Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese
speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those
who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday
next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards.
Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
邀请信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.
Write an invitation letter to them individually:
1. Invite them to the party；
2. Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held；
3. What activities will be arranged for them.
Dear Snoopy,
I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding
ceremony with Ms. Huang Rong to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1,
2007.
As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and
share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a At ten, we will hold a small
company.
校外生活
amusement park.
周末我们去野餐了。
直到傍晚我们才回家。
/
最后我们决定/
我们希望我们所做的会对环境有好
处。
All of us took part in the donation.
所有人都参加了捐献活动。
On the first school day we had a discussion about how to help the people in the disaster-stricken
areas.
开学第一天我们讨论了如何帮助灾区的人们。
We just wanted to express our great concerns and hoped the victims could beat the storm earlier.
我们想表达我们对他们的关心，同时希望那些受害者们能早日战胜风暴。
I bought some presents for my parents, expressing thanks for their support.
我给父母买了礼物，以感谢他们对我的支持。
I think taking a part-time job is good for us middle school students because we can get some social
experience.
我认为做兼职工作对我们中学生有好处，因为我们可以从中获得社会经验。
Last weekend, I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown to the Great Wall, who came to China for the first time.
上周末我带我们的外籍老师布朗先生去了长城，他第一次来中国。
Having been told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazed at this world wonder. He was struck by the beauty of it.
被告知了长城的历史后，他为这一世界奇观感到震惊，并被长城的美所打动。
We expressed our thanks to her.我们向他表达了感谢。
It was snowing / raining heavily on Monday morning.周一早晨下了很大一场雪/雨。
We were at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No.1 to our destination.
我们到了车站，等待一路公共汽车去目的地。
We took a lot of photos to record this activity.
build up stronger friendship.
他们做了个风筝然后一家人去了郊区。
We put up a board to remind people not to destroy our environment.
我们立了个牌子提醒人们不要破坏环境。
课后拓展练习
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
讲义参考答案
课后拓展练习
As can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar in order to raise the water level for drinking. The other crow, however, has already started drinking from its own jar with the help of a long straw.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be creative ways. As indicated in the whole jar.
书面表达（二）：高二篇
提高写作方法
在高考英语书面表达中，一篇优秀作文，除了要点齐全、语言规范准确、内容连贯、行
文流畅以外，还必须在运用较为复杂结构和较高级词汇上有所表现。所以，在整篇文章中，
有意识地灵活运用复杂句式和高级词汇，不仅显示出自己扎实的英语功底，而且为文章增添
亮点，给人一种含金量高的审美享受，也就等于给了阅卷老师一个打高分的理由。
方法一: 注重文章的开始句/主题句、承转句和结尾句，它会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
problems have come into being.
help to us.
4. As an old saying goes/runs, “Honesty is the best policy.”
knowledge and broadens our mind.
13. There is no doubt/denying that education plays a big role in our life.
用于文章结论句。这种句式更能鲜明地表达出说话者的态度和观点, 给人留下一个圆满的
结局。
方法二：在整篇文章中, 要特别注重使用一些较为复杂的结构, 如非谓语动词、独立主格结构、
倒装句、强调句、虚拟句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等。
13. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the
shops, but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.
14. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
15. We could do nothing but/other than wait.
16. Given a chance, I can surprise the world.
17. Television has so many advantages. It keeps us informed about the latest news, but also
provides entertainment in the home.
以上非谓语动词的使用使句子显得更简洁，更高级，必定会获得阅卷老师较好的印象。
18. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling
my troubles away and live a better life.
19. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we care more about
nature and build a harmonious relationship with our earth.
20. Gone are the days when farmers live in the poor houses.
21. Not only should we students study hard, we also should know how to enjoy ourselves in our
spare time.
倒装句有意“打破常规”
凑、行文节奏婉转流畅。
highly of her.
()
32. I’m awfully grateful to you for taking so much trouble to help me. (Thank you for…)
方法二:注重使用短语、习语来代替某些词，使得文章具有多彩性。
33. Every coin has two sides.
34. 25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work
experience and learn more of the society. (think)
35. All work and no play make(s) Jack a dull boy.
在写作中使用一些习语、谚语和俗话使文章带有风趣性。
亮点作文
关于学习效率
No one can deny the importance of efficiency in study. It not only saves us much time which
can be spent in doing other activities, but also improves our memory and enthusiasm for study. Just
imagine how happy you are when you make full use of every minute.
Unfortunately, despite the fact, little attention is paid to it. As a result, we feel so tired and
pressured since we have spent much time on it but nothing works at last. Worse still, some of us are
discouraged and quite at a loss.
So here are some suggestions that may help. First, we should develop a habit of making a study
plan and carrying it out no matter what difficulty comes in the way. Second, doing exercise regularly
will without doubt have positive effects on studying efficiency. Just as the proverb says, all work and
no play makes Jack a dull boy. Only in this way can we study efficiently.
Secondly, „„
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jiang Ping
关于创造力
There is no denying that modern middle school students show great enthusiasm for creativity. It
without doubt makes a big difference in our life. Not only does it improve our study efficiency, but it
also develops our optimism to our life.
However, many of us feel that we are lack of creativity for different reasons. For example, the
combination of study pressure and seemingly boring lifestyle costs us the creativity in ourselves.
So it’s urgent for us to develop creativity by ourselves. The following suggestions may help.
First, find the inspiration. Many things are beautiful and inspiring such as listening to music. Second,
having time to yourself to let your mind wander is important, which may help you come up with
amazing ideas you didn't know you were capable of. Also, doing something creative can have a
positive effect on stress by giving you something relaxing to do. No one has an excuse to say they
are not creative.
根据漫画写短文。(关于尊敬老人)
’s face,
’s company, is
take it for granted that be focus of the family, who turn a blind eye to what their
As far as I ’m the should call for the attention of the whole society.
Needless to say, not only the young but also the old in our society deserve good care and enough
attention. The needs of the old shouldn ’t be ignored. In conclus ion, we shouldn’t lose the good
tradition of caring for the old.
高二必背文章
求学信/求职信
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration. I am writing the letter in
purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position
for a staff member.
I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further
details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my
qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well
suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies
include sports and music.
Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your
prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
开幕词
Ladies and gentlemen,
attention.
通知
Directions:
The St
February 3, 2007
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’
Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese
speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those
who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday
next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards.
Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
Department of Chinese Language and Literature
邀请信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party.
Write an invitation letter to them individually:
1. Invite them to the party；
2. Elaborate on the reason why such a party should be held；
3. What activities will be arranged for them.
Dear Snoopy,
I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding
ceremony with Ms. Huang Rong to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1,
2007.
As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and
share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a At ten, we will hold a small
company.
校外生活
amusement park.
周末我们去野餐了。
直到傍晚我们才回家。
/
最后我们决定/
我们希望我们所做的会对环境有好
处。
All of us took part in the donation.
所有人都参加了捐献活动。
On the first school day we had a discussion about how to help the people in the disaster-stricken
areas.
开学第一天我们讨论了如何帮助灾区的人们。
We just wanted to express our great concerns and hoped the victims could beat the storm earlier.
我们想表达我们对他们的关心，同时希望那些受害者们能早日战胜风暴。
I bought some presents for my parents, expressing thanks for their support.
我给父母买了礼物，以感谢他们对我的支持。
I think taking a part-time job is good for us middle school students because we can get some social
experience.
我认为做兼职工作对我们中学生有好处，因为我们可以从中获得社会经验。
Last weekend, I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown to the Great Wall, who came to China for the first time.
上周末我带我们的外籍老师布朗先生去了长城，他第一次来中国。
Having been told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazed at this world wonder. He was struck by the beauty of it.
被告知了长城的历史后，他为这一世界奇观感到震惊，并被长城的美所打动。
We expressed our thanks to her.我们向他表达了感谢。
It was snowing / raining heavily on Monday morning.周一早晨下了很大一场雪/雨。
We were at the bus stop, waiting for Bus No.1 to our destination.
我们到了车站，等待一路公共汽车去目的地。
We took a lot of photos to record this activity.
build up stronger friendship.
他们做了个风筝然后一家人去了郊区。
We put up a board to remind people not to destroy our environment.
我们立了个牌子提醒人们不要破坏环境。
课后拓展练习
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
讲义参考答案
课后拓展练习
As can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar in order to raise the water level for drinking. The other crow, however, has already started drinking from its own jar with the help of a long straw.
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be creative ways. As indicated in the whole jar.