高三英语写作训练
写作训练的思路:
写一个完整的句子: 句子的完整, 连贯, 简洁, 多样化
设计一个段落
基础写作
读写任务
句子 (写一个完整的句子)
这几句是正确的句子吗? 如果你认为有误, 该怎么改?
1. The meeting will until 3:00.
2. Work hard, you will succeed.
3. I have a brother, who is a doctor.
练习1 : 翻译下列简单句
1.1939年爆发了第二次世界大战.
2.一天, 她高兴地走进我的房间.
3.一轮红日从东方升起.
4.张飞在三年级六班.
5.那个故事听起来很有趣.
6.老师好像对我的工作很满意.
7.早起对人的身体有益.
8.胡姗姗读过这本书多次了.
9.我还没决定去还是不去.
10.周兰借给我一些钱.
11.这件晚礼服花了她四十美元.
12.王小明常常在课堂上问老师许多问题.
13.同学们把课室保持得干干净净.
14.我们注意到有许多人站在学校大门口.
15.我找人把自行车修好了.
16.你不应该让他一个人去那儿.
练习2 : 用并列句翻译下列句子
1.他虽然有病, 但是还是上学去了.
2.汤姆很穷, 而他的弟弟去发了财.
3.他丢了工作, 因此这些天心情不好.
4.韩惠不但歌唱得好, 而且舞也跳得好.
5.我本打算昨天告诉你, 但你不在办公室.
练习3 : 改正下列错句,使他们成为正确的一句话
1.Faulty:
There are forty-five students in our class , one- third of them are from nearby countries. Improved:
2.Faulty:
It was raining hard, they could not work in the field.
Improved:
3. Faulty : The professor walked into the classroom , he carried a bag of books with him. Improved:
练习4 : 改正下列句子,使之更为连贯
Faulty: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.
Revised:
Faulty: The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.
Revised:
练习5 : 改写下列句子, 使其更简洁
1.Wordy: He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. Concise:
2.Wordy: The great wall, which has a history of more than 2000 years, is one of the world heritages,
Concise:
3.Wordy: He attended the party though he was badly ill.
Concise:
4.Wordy: Nie Er, who is the composer of the National Anthem for the People’s Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912.
Concise:
5.Wordy: He suggested that he be sent to tend the sick.
Concise:
6.Wordy: To my surprise, I was surprised to find no one there when I got there.
Concise:
7.Wordy: A teacher who has experience should have an idea about what he should do in such a condition.
Concise:
8. Wordy: Do you know the girl who is dressed in red?
Concise:
9.Wordy: The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him. Concise:
10.Wordy: The man who is standing by the window is our teacher.
Concise:
11.Wordy : I didn’t know her telephone number, so we couldn’t get in touch with her. Concise:
12.Wordy: Johnson looked like a man who was wanted in Los Angeles for robbery.
Concise:
13.Wordy: We finally reached home at 10 pm, and we were tired and hungry.
Concise:
段落(设计好一个段落)
练习1 : 请找出段落的主题句
①Smoking is harmful to your health. Experiment show that smoking can cause cancer. Besides the most serious disease cancer, smoking can also cause other health problems. For example, it gives one a ―smoker’s cough‖. Finally, studies have shown it is easy for smokers to catch colds. Whether you get an unimportant cold or the terrible killer, cancer, smoking is harmful. Is it worth it?
②Albert Einstein, one of the world’s greatest scientists, failed in his university entrance exam on his first attempt. William Faulkner, one of America’s famous writers, never finished college because he could not pass his English courses. Sir Winston Churchill, who is considered one of the masters of the English language, was very poor in English during middle school. These few examples show that failure is school does not always predict failure in life.
③Karaok, which was invented by a Japanese, one of the greatest wonders of modern technology. Needless to say, Karaok is a good way of rest. You can learn a new song easily. It’s also a good way to make your friends happy. Nearly every body has a chance to be a singing star. However, everything has two sides, so does Karaok. It’s noisy to your neighbours. Besides, if you sing badly, they will feel uncomfortable. In fact, you are sure to make a sound pollution. 练习2 : 比较每组的句子, 选出一个合适的主题句.
1) a. Why do people smoke cigarettes?
b. One of the causes of lung cancer is cigarette smoking.
c. My doctor says cigarette smoking takes years off one’s life.
2) a. Birds can travel long distances and find their way back again.
b. The swallow is a migrating bird.
c. There are many theories about how birds manage to find their way back again after they have traveled long distances.
3) a. Hangzhou is famous.
b. Hangzhou is famous for its many tourist attractions.
c. Hangzhou is famous for its beautiful West Lake, its many tourist attractions, and its traditional atmosphere.
4) a. He is left-handed player.
b. Left-handed children are encouraged to use their right hands.
c. Why is proportion of left-handed players is higher in most ball games than in the population as a whole?
5) a. People hate American food.
b. People hate American food that is tasteless and greasy because Americans use too many canned, frozen, and prepackaged food and because everything is fried in oil or butter. c. People hate American food that is tasteless and greasy.
练习3:下面各段没有主题句,请根据全段内容拟定一个主题句.
1) ___________________________________________________. For example teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is very difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that sills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at shop. Everyone has something to sell.
2) __________________________________________________. Before entering a house in Japan, it is a good manner to take off your shoes. In European countries even though shoes sometimes become very muddy, this is not done. A guest in a Chinese house never finishes a drink. He leaves a little to show that he has had enough. In a Malaysian house, too, a guest leaves a little food. In England, a guest always finishes a drink to show that he has enjoyed it. It seems that manners in different countries are never the same.
3) _________________________________________________________. Fire can heat water, cook, give out light and keep your house warm. Sometimes, however, big fires can burn down houses and forests. For example, the big fire caused by Yuanming Palace, a famous palace in Qing Dynasty, ruined completely. So we must be very careful with matches, burning cigarettes, faulty electric appliances or unquenched(未扑灭的) fires
练习4: 找出一个违背单一性的句子.
①China has made great progress in reducing its population growth. ②China has already cut its rate of population growth by about one half since 1970. ③It is wrong of the western governments to find fault with its policies of elimination of poverty. ④China now urges each family to have no more than one child. ⑤And it hopes to reach zero population growth, the number of birth equaling the number of death, by the year 2000.
在议论文中, 我们常会谈到首先, 其次, 然后, 该如何表达?
练习5: 根据所给的主题句和提示, 写好段落的扩展句
(1) 主题句: How excited we were when we learned that we were going to have a spring hour. ① after—discussion—agree—climb—out of the city
② we—often pass by –mountain—the first time—think of—climb it
③ set out—early—morning
④ about—an hour—begin—tired—still a long way—go
⑤ short break—go on—climb
⑥ lunch time—get to the top—mountain
⑦ our beautiful city—below us—happy—very tired
结尾句: It proves that many things are just like climbing a mountain; they look attractive, but they are not easy to do.
(2) 主题句: He was kind and shy before a group of naughty girls, but he was very strict in his teaching and with our students.
① teach us—a lot in knowledge—as well as in morality
② I remember—my final exam
③ Have an idea—look in dictionary—secretly
④ Unfortunately—discover—save my face
⑤ After exam—call—to his office—my heart—beat fast
⑥ Instead of scolding—say kindly—advise—do good—moved—tears
⑦ 18 years—pass—keep—remind me—study hard—honest
基础写作
(常用表达)
1).时间
星期:
月份:
在星期日 在2006年
在二月份 在2006年二月份
在2006年二月三号
在5点钟 在上午/下午/晚上
在九月5号的上午/下午/晚上
在一个阳光灿烂的上午/下午
在21世纪
在20世纪30年代
9:00-10:00
2)人名
李华 李丽华 李教授
3) 地点 (由小到大)
韶关 广州 广东省
我住在韶关市浈江区建国路15号
我们学校在广东省韶关市
503房 四楼
4) 年龄, 身高, 体重
我18岁.
在某人30多岁/ 40多岁的时候
我身高160厘米
我体重50公斤
5) 基数词, 序数词
百, 千, 百万, 十亿 :
五百 成千上百
史密斯一家
四分之一 五分之三
百分之十
第一…第十:
第十二 第二十
第十四 第四十
第四十五
第一课
[写作内容]
1 李莎， 女，英语老师, 22岁， 1.65米，身材苗条, 装扮入时。
2 性格活泼， 爱唱爱跳， 爱开玩笑。
3 教学方法生动活泼，常做游戏，精讲多练。
4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；
5.常与学生通过电子邮件和网上聊天交流。
[写作要求]
1 题目：A Unique Teacher
2 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容
3 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
[写作内容]
1.地理位置: 在广东省深圳的南面
2.人口约600万, 面积1000余平方公里
3.交通: 有现代化的港口及著名的国际机场,新修建的京九铁路把香港和祖国首都北京连接起来
4. 历史: 香港自古以来是中国领土. 150 多年前英国入侵香港, 占领香港
5. 回归: 1997 年7 月1日
[写作要求]
1 题目：Hongkong
2 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容
3 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
任务型写作 写概括 : 如何概括一个段落; 如何概括一篇文章
发表意见或看法: 典型模板, 常用句子
一. 概括一个段落
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the examples
Skill3: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill4: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech (间接引语)
练习1: 概括段落的大意,并说明用哪种方法概括
Example1: Then, you can think of a way to make both sides happy. Here are some tips:
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Skill:
Example2: Sometimes, kids don’t think their parents are fair to them. >>
Skill:
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Skill:
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Skill:
二.概括一篇文章
skills : ①段意合并法 ②要素串联法 ③主题概括法
Exercise: Match the main idea with the proper skill.
It must have been about two in the morning when I returned home. I tried to wake up my wife by ringing the doorbell, but she was fast asleep, so I got a ladder from the shed in the garden, put it against the wall, and began climbing towards the bedroom window. I was almost there when a sarcastic voice below said, ―I don’t think the windows need cleaning at this time of the night.‖ I looked down and nearly fell off the ladder when I saw a policeman. I immediately regretted answering in the way I did, but I said, ― I enjoy cleaning windows at night.‖
―So do I,‖ answered the policeman in the same tone. ―Excuse my interrupting you. I hate to interrupt a man when he’s busy working, but would you mind coming with me to the station?‖ ―Well, I’d prefer to stay here,‖ I said. ― You see, I’ve forgotten my key.‖
―Your what?‖ he called.
―My key,‖ I shouted.
Fortunately, the shouting woke up my wife who opened the window just as the policeman had started to climb towards me
Summary:
Skill:
Advertising can be a service to customers. This is true when advertisements give reliable information about the goods advertised. Such information is needed if the customer is to make a sensible choice when he buys something. It is useful in that it lets him know of the kinds of goods in the shops. Printed advertisements do this job best. Customers can collect them and
compare them. They can be taken along to the shops and their statements can be checked against and actual goods in the shops.
Some advertisements are not very useful to the customers. Instead of helping the customer to satisfy his real needs, they set out to make him want things. They set out to make us believe that what they advertise will make us cleverer, prettier, more handsome, if only we use it. The voice on TV says, ― Getaway people use XYZ petrol.‖ The screen shows a picture of petrol pump for a fast expensive car owned by a boy with a pretty girlfriend. They drive off to the wonderful
country or a lovely beach. Some people may feel that clever, successful people use XYZ petrol. Some might choose that petrol every time they fill up their cars.
Summary:
Skill:
Students should think now about what extracurricular (课外的) activities they'd like to participate in. Participating in extracurricular activities may help you deepen your physical, creative, social, political, and career interests by bringing you into communication with other like-minded people you didn’t previously know.
You can join groups as a way to get support from other students. A club or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you. Lots of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to break down the barriers between people. Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in other ways, too. It looks good on college and job applications and shows admissions officers and employers you're well-rounded and responsible. Specific activities help with specific goals.
The most basic reason for joining a club or team is that it gives you something better to do than staring at the wall, wandering the hall, or sleeping all afternoon. People who are participating are less likely to pick up bad habits, like smoking or drinking.
Summary:
Skill:
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点.
2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)
3. 归纳得出作者的结论.
a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)
b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.
开头: We are all aware that everything has its two sides. ______ is no exception.
优点: ____ has brought a number of benefits to us.
—— is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages.
First of all, ________. Also, ____________. Most importantly, ____________________. 缺点: Just as a coin has two sides, ______ also has some side effects.
However, ______ has also a lot of problems.
For one thing, ____________; For another, ___________. Finally, ____________.
结尾: 1）In spite of these disadvantages, I think ____ does more good than harm to people. And the disadvantages, since they have been pointed out clearly, will be dealt with effectively.
2）Weighing the two sides, there is no denying the fact that ______ has produced great effects on society.
3）To conclude, I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
4）In sum, ______ does more good than harm to ______. We must take a correct attitude towards ______. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.
表达个人观点的用语
I think/ I firmly believe that …
in my opinion, / in my view,….
personally speaking,…
As far as I am concerned, …
In my point of view, ….
常用句子
1.No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it..
2.Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.
3.As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
4.Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't say a word.
5.There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the
production.
6.There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
7.I take it for granted that they will support this idea.
8.It is true that we must make our greater efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries
9.We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.
10.To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.
11.As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
12.As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
13.As is known to us, knowledge is power.
14.It’s well known that Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake.
15.To tell you the truth , many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
16. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
17.As the saying goes, where there is a will ,there is a way.
18.It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.
19.Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively.
20.Group three helped to raise money in the street for the ―Hope Project‖, so that more children in poor areas can afford their schooling
21.Therefore, it is urgent for the government to take immediate measures to solve the problem of water shortage.
22.Thought it is hard to do away with this conversation, it is worth trying.
23.It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome.
24.Although Li Hua was the last one to cross the finishing line, he won the ―Courage Cup‖ with honor. I was deeply touched by Li Hua’s great determination.
25.These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our personal values as well.
26.Last Sunday,our class organized some volunteer’s activities, in which all of us took an active part.
27.It’s reported that Li Ming won the game last week.
28.It’s no use crying over the spilt milk.
29.This is by no means the best way to solve the problem of energy crisis.
30.According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...
31. I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that we place too much emphasis on test scores.
32.Only by doing so can we improve the situation.
33.Different people have different attitudes towards….
34.Why do more and more teenagers smoke? The reasons are as follow.
35.When men and women work together, neither of them will feel tired.
常用谚语
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难
4.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智
6. No pain, no gains. 一分耕耘, 一分收获
7.Experience is the mother wisdom. 实践出真知
8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息, 聪明孩子也变傻
9.More hasty, less speed. 欲速则不达
10.It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老
11.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必是金子
12.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行, 始于足下
13.Look before you leap. 三思而后行
14.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功
15.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗
16.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同
17.Well begun, half done. 好的开始是成功的一半
18.Ill news travel fast. 坏事传千里
19.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情
20.Live not to eat, but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭, 吃饭是为了活着
21.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜于语言
22.East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝, 不如自家草窝
23.Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. 情人眼里出西施
24.Don’t judge a book by its cover. 不要以貌取人
高三英语写作训练
写作训练的思路:
写一个完整的句子: 句子的完整, 连贯, 简洁, 多样化
设计一个段落
基础写作
读写任务
句子 (写一个完整的句子)
这几句是正确的句子吗? 如果你认为有误, 该怎么改?
1. The meeting will until 3:00.
2. Work hard, you will succeed.
3. I have a brother, who is a doctor.
练习1 : 翻译下列简单句
1.1939年爆发了第二次世界大战.
2.一天, 她高兴地走进我的房间.
3.一轮红日从东方升起.
4.张飞在三年级六班.
5.那个故事听起来很有趣.
6.老师好像对我的工作很满意.
7.早起对人的身体有益.
8.胡姗姗读过这本书多次了.
9.我还没决定去还是不去.
10.周兰借给我一些钱.
11.这件晚礼服花了她四十美元.
12.王小明常常在课堂上问老师许多问题.
13.同学们把课室保持得干干净净.
14.我们注意到有许多人站在学校大门口.
15.我找人把自行车修好了.
16.你不应该让他一个人去那儿.
练习2 : 用并列句翻译下列句子
1.他虽然有病, 但是还是上学去了.
2.汤姆很穷, 而他的弟弟去发了财.
3.他丢了工作, 因此这些天心情不好.
4.韩惠不但歌唱得好, 而且舞也跳得好.
5.我本打算昨天告诉你, 但你不在办公室.
练习3 : 改正下列错句,使他们成为正确的一句话
1.Faulty:
There are forty-five students in our class , one- third of them are from nearby countries. Improved:
2.Faulty:
It was raining hard, they could not work in the field.
Improved:
3. Faulty : The professor walked into the classroom , he carried a bag of books with him. Improved:
练习4 : 改正下列句子,使之更为连贯
Faulty: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.
Revised:
Faulty: The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.
Revised:
练习5 : 改写下列句子, 使其更简洁
1.Wordy: He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. Concise:
2.Wordy: The great wall, which has a history of more than 2000 years, is one of the world heritages,
Concise:
3.Wordy: He attended the party though he was badly ill.
Concise:
4.Wordy: Nie Er, who is the composer of the National Anthem for the People’s Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912.
Concise:
5.Wordy: He suggested that he be sent to tend the sick.
Concise:
6.Wordy: To my surprise, I was surprised to find no one there when I got there.
Concise:
7.Wordy: A teacher who has experience should have an idea about what he should do in such a condition.
Concise:
8. Wordy: Do you know the girl who is dressed in red?
Concise:
9.Wordy: The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him. Concise:
10.Wordy: The man who is standing by the window is our teacher.
Concise:
11.Wordy : I didn’t know her telephone number, so we couldn’t get in touch with her. Concise:
12.Wordy: Johnson looked like a man who was wanted in Los Angeles for robbery.
Concise:
13.Wordy: We finally reached home at 10 pm, and we were tired and hungry.
Concise:
段落(设计好一个段落)
练习1 : 请找出段落的主题句
①Smoking is harmful to your health. Experiment show that smoking can cause cancer. Besides the most serious disease cancer, smoking can also cause other health problems. For example, it gives one a ―smoker’s cough‖. Finally, studies have shown it is easy for smokers to catch colds. Whether you get an unimportant cold or the terrible killer, cancer, smoking is harmful. Is it worth it?
②Albert Einstein, one of the world’s greatest scientists, failed in his university entrance exam on his first attempt. William Faulkner, one of America’s famous writers, never finished college because he could not pass his English courses. Sir Winston Churchill, who is considered one of the masters of the English language, was very poor in English during middle school. These few examples show that failure is school does not always predict failure in life.
③Karaok, which was invented by a Japanese, one of the greatest wonders of modern technology. Needless to say, Karaok is a good way of rest. You can learn a new song easily. It’s also a good way to make your friends happy. Nearly every body has a chance to be a singing star. However, everything has two sides, so does Karaok. It’s noisy to your neighbours. Besides, if you sing badly, they will feel uncomfortable. In fact, you are sure to make a sound pollution. 练习2 : 比较每组的句子, 选出一个合适的主题句.
1) a. Why do people smoke cigarettes?
b. One of the causes of lung cancer is cigarette smoking.
c. My doctor says cigarette smoking takes years off one’s life.
2) a. Birds can travel long distances and find their way back again.
b. The swallow is a migrating bird.
c. There are many theories about how birds manage to find their way back again after they have traveled long distances.
3) a. Hangzhou is famous.
b. Hangzhou is famous for its many tourist attractions.
c. Hangzhou is famous for its beautiful West Lake, its many tourist attractions, and its traditional atmosphere.
4) a. He is left-handed player.
b. Left-handed children are encouraged to use their right hands.
c. Why is proportion of left-handed players is higher in most ball games than in the population as a whole?
5) a. People hate American food.
b. People hate American food that is tasteless and greasy because Americans use too many canned, frozen, and prepackaged food and because everything is fried in oil or butter. c. People hate American food that is tasteless and greasy.
练习3:下面各段没有主题句,请根据全段内容拟定一个主题句.
1) ___________________________________________________. For example teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is very difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that sills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at shop. Everyone has something to sell.
2) __________________________________________________. Before entering a house in Japan, it is a good manner to take off your shoes. In European countries even though shoes sometimes become very muddy, this is not done. A guest in a Chinese house never finishes a drink. He leaves a little to show that he has had enough. In a Malaysian house, too, a guest leaves a little food. In England, a guest always finishes a drink to show that he has enjoyed it. It seems that manners in different countries are never the same.
3) _________________________________________________________. Fire can heat water, cook, give out light and keep your house warm. Sometimes, however, big fires can burn down houses and forests. For example, the big fire caused by Yuanming Palace, a famous palace in Qing Dynasty, ruined completely. So we must be very careful with matches, burning cigarettes, faulty electric appliances or unquenched(未扑灭的) fires
练习4: 找出一个违背单一性的句子.
①China has made great progress in reducing its population growth. ②China has already cut its rate of population growth by about one half since 1970. ③It is wrong of the western governments to find fault with its policies of elimination of poverty. ④China now urges each family to have no more than one child. ⑤And it hopes to reach zero population growth, the number of birth equaling the number of death, by the year 2000.
在议论文中, 我们常会谈到首先, 其次, 然后, 该如何表达?
练习5: 根据所给的主题句和提示, 写好段落的扩展句
(1) 主题句: How excited we were when we learned that we were going to have a spring hour. ① after—discussion—agree—climb—out of the city
② we—often pass by –mountain—the first time—think of—climb it
③ set out—early—morning
④ about—an hour—begin—tired—still a long way—go
⑤ short break—go on—climb
⑥ lunch time—get to the top—mountain
⑦ our beautiful city—below us—happy—very tired
结尾句: It proves that many things are just like climbing a mountain; they look attractive, but they are not easy to do.
(2) 主题句: He was kind and shy before a group of naughty girls, but he was very strict in his teaching and with our students.
① teach us—a lot in knowledge—as well as in morality
② I remember—my final exam
③ Have an idea—look in dictionary—secretly
④ Unfortunately—discover—save my face
⑤ After exam—call—to his office—my heart—beat fast
⑥ Instead of scolding—say kindly—advise—do good—moved—tears
⑦ 18 years—pass—keep—remind me—study hard—honest
基础写作
(常用表达)
1).时间
星期:
月份:
在星期日 在2006年
在二月份 在2006年二月份
在2006年二月三号
在5点钟 在上午/下午/晚上
在九月5号的上午/下午/晚上
在一个阳光灿烂的上午/下午
在21世纪
在20世纪30年代
9:00-10:00
2)人名
李华 李丽华 李教授
3) 地点 (由小到大)
韶关 广州 广东省
我住在韶关市浈江区建国路15号
我们学校在广东省韶关市
503房 四楼
4) 年龄, 身高, 体重
我18岁.
在某人30多岁/ 40多岁的时候
我身高160厘米
我体重50公斤
5) 基数词, 序数词
百, 千, 百万, 十亿 :
五百 成千上百
史密斯一家
四分之一 五分之三
百分之十
第一…第十:
第十二 第二十
第十四 第四十
第四十五
第一课
[写作内容]
1 李莎， 女，英语老师, 22岁， 1.65米，身材苗条, 装扮入时。
2 性格活泼， 爱唱爱跳， 爱开玩笑。
3 教学方法生动活泼，常做游戏，精讲多练。
4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；
5.常与学生通过电子邮件和网上聊天交流。
[写作要求]
1 题目：A Unique Teacher
2 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容
3 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
[写作内容]
1.地理位置: 在广东省深圳的南面
2.人口约600万, 面积1000余平方公里
3.交通: 有现代化的港口及著名的国际机场,新修建的京九铁路把香港和祖国首都北京连接起来
4. 历史: 香港自古以来是中国领土. 150 多年前英国入侵香港, 占领香港
5. 回归: 1997 年7 月1日
[写作要求]
1 题目：Hongkong
2 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容
3 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
任务型写作 写概括 : 如何概括一个段落; 如何概括一篇文章
发表意见或看法: 典型模板, 常用句子
一. 概括一个段落
Skill1: Omit (省略) the details
Skill2: Omit the examples
Skill3: Use general(概括性) words instead of specific(具体的) words
Skill4: Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech (间接引语)
练习1: 概括段落的大意,并说明用哪种方法概括
Example1: Then, you can think of a way to make both sides happy. Here are some tips:
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Skill:
Example2: Sometimes, kids don’t think their parents are fair to them. >>
Skill:
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Skill:
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Skill:
二.概括一篇文章
skills : ①段意合并法 ②要素串联法 ③主题概括法
Exercise: Match the main idea with the proper skill.
It must have been about two in the morning when I returned home. I tried to wake up my wife by ringing the doorbell, but she was fast asleep, so I got a ladder from the shed in the garden, put it against the wall, and began climbing towards the bedroom window. I was almost there when a sarcastic voice below said, ―I don’t think the windows need cleaning at this time of the night.‖ I looked down and nearly fell off the ladder when I saw a policeman. I immediately regretted answering in the way I did, but I said, ― I enjoy cleaning windows at night.‖
―So do I,‖ answered the policeman in the same tone. ―Excuse my interrupting you. I hate to interrupt a man when he’s busy working, but would you mind coming with me to the station?‖ ―Well, I’d prefer to stay here,‖ I said. ― You see, I’ve forgotten my key.‖
―Your what?‖ he called.
―My key,‖ I shouted.
Fortunately, the shouting woke up my wife who opened the window just as the policeman had started to climb towards me
Summary:
Skill:
Advertising can be a service to customers. This is true when advertisements give reliable information about the goods advertised. Such information is needed if the customer is to make a sensible choice when he buys something. It is useful in that it lets him know of the kinds of goods in the shops. Printed advertisements do this job best. Customers can collect them and
compare them. They can be taken along to the shops and their statements can be checked against and actual goods in the shops.
Some advertisements are not very useful to the customers. Instead of helping the customer to satisfy his real needs, they set out to make him want things. They set out to make us believe that what they advertise will make us cleverer, prettier, more handsome, if only we use it. The voice on TV says, ― Getaway people use XYZ petrol.‖ The screen shows a picture of petrol pump for a fast expensive car owned by a boy with a pretty girlfriend. They drive off to the wonderful
country or a lovely beach. Some people may feel that clever, successful people use XYZ petrol. Some might choose that petrol every time they fill up their cars.
Summary:
Skill:
Students should think now about what extracurricular (课外的) activities they'd like to participate in. Participating in extracurricular activities may help you deepen your physical, creative, social, political, and career interests by bringing you into communication with other like-minded people you didn’t previously know.
You can join groups as a way to get support from other students. A club or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you. Lots of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to break down the barriers between people. Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in other ways, too. It looks good on college and job applications and shows admissions officers and employers you're well-rounded and responsible. Specific activities help with specific goals.
The most basic reason for joining a club or team is that it gives you something better to do than staring at the wall, wandering the hall, or sleeping all afternoon. People who are participating are less likely to pick up bad habits, like smoking or drinking.
Summary:
Skill:
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点.
2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)
3. 归纳得出作者的结论.
a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)
b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.
开头: We are all aware that everything has its two sides. ______ is no exception.
优点: ____ has brought a number of benefits to us.
—— is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages.
First of all, ________. Also, ____________. Most importantly, ____________________. 缺点: Just as a coin has two sides, ______ also has some side effects.
However, ______ has also a lot of problems.
For one thing, ____________; For another, ___________. Finally, ____________.
结尾: 1）In spite of these disadvantages, I think ____ does more good than harm to people. And the disadvantages, since they have been pointed out clearly, will be dealt with effectively.
2）Weighing the two sides, there is no denying the fact that ______ has produced great effects on society.
3）To conclude, I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
4）In sum, ______ does more good than harm to ______. We must take a correct attitude towards ______. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.
表达个人观点的用语
I think/ I firmly believe that …
in my opinion, / in my view,….
personally speaking,…
As far as I am concerned, …
In my point of view, ….
常用句子
1.No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it..
2.Noting can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.
3.As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
4.Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't say a word.
5.There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the
production.
6.There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any difficulties.
7.I take it for granted that they will support this idea.
8.It is true that we must make our greater efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed countries
9.We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard.
10.To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice.
11.As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book.
12.As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
13.As is known to us, knowledge is power.
14.It’s well known that Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake.
15.To tell you the truth , many mistakes we made could have been avoided.
16. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
17.As the saying goes, where there is a will ,there is a way.
18.It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.
19.Compared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more interesting and lively.
20.Group three helped to raise money in the street for the ―Hope Project‖, so that more children in poor areas can afford their schooling
21.Therefore, it is urgent for the government to take immediate measures to solve the problem of water shortage.
22.Thought it is hard to do away with this conversation, it is worth trying.
23.It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome.
24.Although Li Hua was the last one to cross the finishing line, he won the ―Courage Cup‖ with honor. I was deeply touched by Li Hua’s great determination.
25.These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our personal values as well.
26.Last Sunday,our class organized some volunteer’s activities, in which all of us took an active part.
27.It’s reported that Li Ming won the game last week.
28.It’s no use crying over the spilt milk.
29.This is by no means the best way to solve the problem of energy crisis.
30.According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that...
31. I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that we place too much emphasis on test scores.
32.Only by doing so can we improve the situation.
33.Different people have different attitudes towards….
34.Why do more and more teenagers smoke? The reasons are as follow.
35.When men and women work together, neither of them will feel tired.
常用谚语
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难
4.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智
6. No pain, no gains. 一分耕耘, 一分收获
7.Experience is the mother wisdom. 实践出真知
8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息, 聪明孩子也变傻
9.More hasty, less speed. 欲速则不达
10.It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老
11.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必是金子
12.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行, 始于足下
13.Look before you leap. 三思而后行
14.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功
15.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗
16.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同
17.Well begun, half done. 好的开始是成功的一半
18.Ill news travel fast. 坏事传千里
19.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情
20.Live not to eat, but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭, 吃饭是为了活着
21.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜于语言
22.East or west, home is the best. 金窝银窝, 不如自家草窝
23.Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. 情人眼里出西施
24.Don’t judge a book by its cover. 不要以貌取人