2013广东高考英语书面表达话题作文五:个人情感与人际关系
课标解读
个人情感指个人的喜怒哀乐、骄傲、孤寂、担忧、紧张、害怕等,以及微笑、大笑、大哭、大喊、面部表情、手势等情感表达的方法,也意指学生对学校生活的切身体验及由此产生的心情。
人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊,与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通,如师生关系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等;对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等,请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解,等等。
命题预测
根据广东高考写作题的特点,针对个人感情话题,高考命题人可能会要求考生叙述发生在身边的一件事,并表达自己的情感;描述考生在学校所参加的一次活动,并谈谈自己的体会。
人际关系方面,高考命题人可能会选择上述“课标解读”中的某一个话题,如宽容、赞扬等,要求考生通过自己或他人的一次经历来发表看法。以下几个具体话题值得关注:
(1)有的同学抱怨父母的期望高、作业多、压力太大,或对生活中的其他方面感到不满,请写一篇短文,准备在“我们应该抱怨生活吗”的主题班会上发表你的看法。
(2)假如你是李华,一年前你随父母迁移到某地并进入一所当地高中就读,由于不懂当地的话,学习、生活很不顺心,请你向某中学英文报写一封求助信。
(3)写一篇短文,参加“增进父母与孩子之间的理解,构建和谐家庭”的演讲比赛。
(4)就“如何构建和谐班集体”谈谈你的看法。
(5)描写你和你的同学是怎样建立起友好关系的。
必备词句
个人情感
(1)be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安/紧张/孤独
(2)be pleased with对……感到高兴
(3)be worried about / worry about 担心,担忧
(4)be / get angry with sb. about sth. 因某事生某人的气
(5)be disappointed at sb. 对某人感到失望
(6)be confident of sth. / in sb. 对某事/某人有信心
(7)We are deeply grateful to you for your support. 我们深深感谢你的支持。
(8)It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow. 我们明天必须离开,真是遗憾。
人际关系
(1)learn from each other 互相学习
(2)promote the friendship 增进友谊
(3)improve the relationship改善关系
(4)show love and concern for sb. 爱护和关心某人
(5)Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. 善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。
(6)A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。
(7)To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other. 要建立良好的关系,我们应该彼此信任。
(8)Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship. 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。
(9)They find it easy to communicate with their teachers. 他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。
(10)With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university. 在他们的帮助下,我努力学习,成功地被一所重点大学录取。
(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students. 我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。
(12)With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life. 在父亲的鼓励和支持下,我克服了生活中的许多困难。
考题解析
基础写作1:给刚从外地转来的新同学的一封信
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入到新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。
[写作内容]请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
(1)帮他分析原因:害羞,怕同学取笑。
(2)给他提出建议:学习普通话,跟同学交流意见。
(3)陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make
new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Li Hua 基础写作2:给送生日礼物的朋友写封感谢信
假设你是李华,昨天你出乎意料地收到你的好朋友Jack寄给你的生日礼物——一本电子词典。请根据以下要点,写一封感谢信。
[写作内容]
(1)收到他的礼物,你感到十分高兴,因为你正急需一本这样的电子词典,而且你几乎找遍了全市的商店都买不到;
(2)这本电子词典对你的英语学习很有帮助;
(3)感谢他送给你的礼物,并表示会努力学好英语作为回报;
(4)希望他暑假有空来你家一起学习英语。
Dear Jack,
Yesterday, I received your present, a useful electronic dictionary, very unexpectedly and excitedly. Believe it or not, what you sent me is the very electronic dictionary I am anxious for. I have been looking for it in almost every store in my city. I’m sure this electronic dictionary must be of great help to my English learning. Thank you for your timely help and fine present, and I will work harder at English in return. If you have time this summer holiday, I’d like you to come to my home and let’s study English together.
Best wishes to your parents.
Yours, Li Hua
任务写作1:父母与子女之间如何建立良好关系
以约120个词就“父母与子女的良好关系”发表你的看法,包括如下要点:
(1)父母与子女关系良好的重要性;
(2)你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的;
(3)如何才能建立这种关系?
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. Parents always show love and concern for us. They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters. With their help, we can overcome many difficulties in our life.
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.
Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.(117 words)
2013广东高考英语书面表达话题作文五:个人情感与人际关系
课标解读
个人情感指个人的喜怒哀乐、骄傲、孤寂、担忧、紧张、害怕等,以及微笑、大笑、大哭、大喊、面部表情、手势等情感表达的方法,也意指学生对学校生活的切身体验及由此产生的心情。
人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊,与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通,如师生关系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等;对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等,请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解,等等。
命题预测
根据广东高考写作题的特点,针对个人感情话题,高考命题人可能会要求考生叙述发生在身边的一件事,并表达自己的情感;描述考生在学校所参加的一次活动,并谈谈自己的体会。
人际关系方面,高考命题人可能会选择上述“课标解读”中的某一个话题,如宽容、赞扬等,要求考生通过自己或他人的一次经历来发表看法。以下几个具体话题值得关注:
(1)有的同学抱怨父母的期望高、作业多、压力太大,或对生活中的其他方面感到不满,请写一篇短文,准备在“我们应该抱怨生活吗”的主题班会上发表你的看法。
(2)假如你是李华,一年前你随父母迁移到某地并进入一所当地高中就读,由于不懂当地的话,学习、生活很不顺心,请你向某中学英文报写一封求助信。
(3)写一篇短文,参加“增进父母与孩子之间的理解,构建和谐家庭”的演讲比赛。
(4)就“如何构建和谐班集体”谈谈你的看法。
(5)描写你和你的同学是怎样建立起友好关系的。
必备词句
个人情感
(1)be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安/紧张/孤独
(2)be pleased with对……感到高兴
(3)be worried about / worry about 担心,担忧
(4)be / get angry with sb. about sth. 因某事生某人的气
(5)be disappointed at sb. 对某人感到失望
(6)be confident of sth. / in sb. 对某事/某人有信心
(7)We are deeply grateful to you for your support. 我们深深感谢你的支持。
(8)It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow. 我们明天必须离开,真是遗憾。
人际关系
(1)learn from each other 互相学习
(2)promote the friendship 增进友谊
(3)improve the relationship改善关系
(4)show love and concern for sb. 爱护和关心某人
(5)Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. 善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。
(6)A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。
(7)To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other. 要建立良好的关系,我们应该彼此信任。
(8)Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship. 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。
(9)They find it easy to communicate with their teachers. 他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。
(10)With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university. 在他们的帮助下,我努力学习,成功地被一所重点大学录取。
(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students. 我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。
(12)With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life. 在父亲的鼓励和支持下,我克服了生活中的许多困难。
考题解析
基础写作1:给刚从外地转来的新同学的一封信
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入到新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。
[写作内容]请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
(1)帮他分析原因:害羞,怕同学取笑。
(2)给他提出建议:学习普通话,跟同学交流意见。
(3)陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make
new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Li Hua 基础写作2:给送生日礼物的朋友写封感谢信
假设你是李华,昨天你出乎意料地收到你的好朋友Jack寄给你的生日礼物——一本电子词典。请根据以下要点,写一封感谢信。
[写作内容]
(1)收到他的礼物,你感到十分高兴,因为你正急需一本这样的电子词典,而且你几乎找遍了全市的商店都买不到;
(2)这本电子词典对你的英语学习很有帮助;
(3)感谢他送给你的礼物,并表示会努力学好英语作为回报;
(4)希望他暑假有空来你家一起学习英语。
Dear Jack,
Yesterday, I received your present, a useful electronic dictionary, very unexpectedly and excitedly. Believe it or not, what you sent me is the very electronic dictionary I am anxious for. I have been looking for it in almost every store in my city. I’m sure this electronic dictionary must be of great help to my English learning. Thank you for your timely help and fine present, and I will work harder at English in return. If you have time this summer holiday, I’d like you to come to my home and let’s study English together.
Best wishes to your parents.
Yours, Li Hua
任务写作1:父母与子女之间如何建立良好关系
以约120个词就“父母与子女的良好关系”发表你的看法,包括如下要点:
(1)父母与子女关系良好的重要性;
(2)你希望与你的父母之间的关系是怎样的;
(3)如何才能建立这种关系?
An ideal relationship between parents and children is very important for our growth. Parents always show love and concern for us. They are our good listeners, advisers and supporters. With their help, we can overcome many difficulties in our life.
In my opinion, the relationship between parents and children should be one filled with love, care and understanding, in which parents and children show respect for each other and exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, parents should become friends of their children while children ought to place more trust in their parents and give voice to their feelings frankly.
Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious relationship between parents and children.(117 words)