2013年安徽卷高考英语作文的教学思路
2013年安徽卷高考英语作文是以“On the Way to School”为题,突出“讲求文明,从我做起”的主题思想的作文,题型比较开放,学生可自由发挥。但是本题贴近考生实际生活,难度适当,主要考查考生综合运用英语陈述观点的能力。此类题型要求考生在完成这种开放性书面表达时,既要做到所写内容符合题意,结构合理,切不可像记流水账一样。同时要兼顾语法和词汇的运用。。为此,考生首先要认真审题,以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题展开写作。其次,确定写的内容,即自己在上学路上要一方面遵守交通法规,另一方面要举止文明。 以下是我进行课堂教学的思路。
一、pre-writing
Group work:让学生分组进行讨论What bad behaviors do you often run into on the way to school? 通过这种brainstorming 收集相关写作素材,便于后面展开写作。
二、while-writing
此阶段要进行分段式写作,我们采用三段法。
第一段:提出问题(紧扣主题:遵守交通和举止文明方面)及其影响
■ How is the present situation of people obeying traffic rules?
■ How do people behave in public?
■ Which behavior do you often meet on the way to school?
■ What effects does people’s bad behavior have?
第二段:解决问题(紧扣主题:上学路上,自己遵守交通和举止文明的具体做法) ■ What should we do to help to make a change?
■ What means of transport should I choose when I go to school?
■ If I take a bus to school, what should I do?
■ If I take my dad’s or mum’s car to school, what should I do?
■ If I ride a bike to school, what should I do?
■ If I walk to school, what should I do?
■ What should I do when I see some litter on the way?
■ What should I do when I see an old lady or man who wants to cross the road?
第三段:个人总结(如感受、期望或呼吁等)
■ How do I feel about my behavior?
■ What do I look forward to?
Preparations for writing:
第一步:小组进行回答以上问题,实际上就形成了文章的核心内容。
第二步:讨论需要哪些语篇结构表达。
首先,段落的主题句。
其次,语篇标志表达(Discourse Marker)。
1. 过渡句。
2. “起、承、转、合”的连接表达,如:
⑴ 表并列关系的词语:
■ and, or, also,as well, too;
■ as well as…,not only…but also, both … and…
⑵ 表增补的词语:
■ in addition, furthermore, besides, moreover, again, also, what’s more, similarly… ⑶ 表转折对比的过渡词:
■ although, but, however, yet, instead, on the contrary …
⑷ 表原因的词语:
■ because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to, owing to, for this
reason, considering that, seeing that; as a result of …
⑸ 表结果的词语:
■ so, so that, so…that, such…that,as a result;therefore; thus;consequently … ⑹ 表特定的顺序关系的词语:
■ First / Firstly, … Second / Secondly, … Third / Thirdly …
■ First of all / To begin with , then, next, finally/in the end/at last …
⑺ 表总结的词语:
■ in a word, to sum up, in conclusion, in short, in general, generally speaking, finally,
to conclude …
三、post-writing
第一:完成写作,相互批阅。
第二:推荐优秀作品,全班分享。
第三:誊写写作收获与反思。
2013年安徽卷高考英语作文的教学思路
2013年安徽卷高考英语作文是以“On the Way to School”为题,突出“讲求文明,从我做起”的主题思想的作文,题型比较开放,学生可自由发挥。但是本题贴近考生实际生活,难度适当,主要考查考生综合运用英语陈述观点的能力。此类题型要求考生在完成这种开放性书面表达时,既要做到所写内容符合题意,结构合理,切不可像记流水账一样。同时要兼顾语法和词汇的运用。。为此,考生首先要认真审题,以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题展开写作。其次,确定写的内容,即自己在上学路上要一方面遵守交通法规,另一方面要举止文明。 以下是我进行课堂教学的思路。
一、pre-writing
Group work:让学生分组进行讨论What bad behaviors do you often run into on the way to school? 通过这种brainstorming 收集相关写作素材,便于后面展开写作。
二、while-writing
此阶段要进行分段式写作,我们采用三段法。
第一段:提出问题(紧扣主题:遵守交通和举止文明方面)及其影响
■ How is the present situation of people obeying traffic rules?
■ How do people behave in public?
■ Which behavior do you often meet on the way to school?
■ What effects does people’s bad behavior have?
第二段:解决问题(紧扣主题:上学路上,自己遵守交通和举止文明的具体做法) ■ What should we do to help to make a change?
■ What means of transport should I choose when I go to school?
■ If I take a bus to school, what should I do?
■ If I take my dad’s or mum’s car to school, what should I do?
■ If I ride a bike to school, what should I do?
■ If I walk to school, what should I do?
■ What should I do when I see some litter on the way?
■ What should I do when I see an old lady or man who wants to cross the road?
第三段:个人总结(如感受、期望或呼吁等)
■ How do I feel about my behavior?
■ What do I look forward to?
Preparations for writing:
第一步:小组进行回答以上问题,实际上就形成了文章的核心内容。
第二步:讨论需要哪些语篇结构表达。
首先,段落的主题句。
其次,语篇标志表达(Discourse Marker)。
1. 过渡句。
2. “起、承、转、合”的连接表达,如:
⑴ 表并列关系的词语:
■ and, or, also,as well, too;
■ as well as…,not only…but also, both … and…
⑵ 表增补的词语:
■ in addition, furthermore, besides, moreover, again, also, what’s more, similarly… ⑶ 表转折对比的过渡词:
■ although, but, however, yet, instead, on the contrary …
⑷ 表原因的词语:
■ because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to, owing to, for this
reason, considering that, seeing that; as a result of …
⑸ 表结果的词语:
■ so, so that, so…that, such…that,as a result;therefore; thus;consequently … ⑹ 表特定的顺序关系的词语:
■ First / Firstly, … Second / Secondly, … Third / Thirdly …
■ First of all / To begin with , then, next, finally/in the end/at last …
⑺ 表总结的词语:
■ in a word, to sum up, in conclusion, in short, in general, generally speaking, finally,
to conclude …
三、post-writing
第一:完成写作,相互批阅。
第二:推荐优秀作品,全班分享。
第三:誊写写作收获与反思。