Part ⅠWriting (30minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
On Excessive Packaging
On Excessive Packaging
In recent years, with the economy growing, all kinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging has aroused people’s wide concern。
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. For one thing, the business has seen through the mind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the more beautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing, excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form far outweighs the content。
In my opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorate its appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have a rational and pure shopping condition, making our money worthwhile。
在审题之后，我们得到了一下几个信息：
第一，没有中文的说明
第二，有图片，要加上描述图片的“废话”。
第三，图片中有单词，有数据
于是开始写：第一段：引入现象
因为这是图片题，所以先上句“应景”的废话“As we can see from the picture that”，其余的部分直接往上写我们的模版“nowadays, the phenomenon of …… has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future”
第一段可以写成：
As we can see from the picture that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays to the first place but not the degree , ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures.
第二段可以有两种写法，即第一种，说明这个“Education Pays”的原因，我给大家了四个原因写上一个就行。第一种写成：现象原因。
Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，the following
one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not a opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life. So,they want to get a job as early as possible.But, as matter of fact, as the picture described, the people who have learned more earn more than others And,in the picture, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn more XXXX than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.
在这个段落中，最后一句话，我着重引用了一下图片的数据，比较了一下，没写倍数，那东西一不留神就写错，不写！
第二段也还可以写成：现象讨论，即大家对这个事儿看法不一致。有的人觉得这个事儿对什么好，有的人觉得这个事儿对什么坏！写上就好，因为，无论什么事儿，大家的观点都不是一致的哦！第二段第二种如下：
Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not ，as a matter of fact ，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, by this
way,they can earn mare money. However ，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard works.But,most of people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits
以上连个段落，大家根据自己的想法写上一个就好了，可别都写，真
的写不下的！
第三段，其实万古不变，就是个人观点，观点最好是建议或者对策，照着之前给出的三个，随便写写好了：
To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it.And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators ，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.
Part ⅠWriting (30minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2. 出现这一现象的原因
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议
On Excessive Packaging
On Excessive Packaging
In recent years, with the economy growing, all kinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging has aroused people’s wide concern。
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. For one thing, the business has seen through the mind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the more beautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing, excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form far outweighs the content。
In my opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorate its appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have a rational and pure shopping condition, making our money worthwhile。
在审题之后，我们得到了一下几个信息：
第一，没有中文的说明
第二，有图片，要加上描述图片的“废话”。
第三，图片中有单词，有数据
于是开始写：第一段：引入现象
因为这是图片题，所以先上句“应景”的废话“As we can see from the picture that”，其余的部分直接往上写我们的模版“nowadays, the phenomenon of …… has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future”
第一段可以写成：
As we can see from the picture that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people's future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays to the first place but not the degree , ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures.
第二段可以有两种写法，即第一种，说明这个“Education Pays”的原因，我给大家了四个原因写上一个就行。第一种写成：现象原因。
Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，the following
one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not a opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life. So,they want to get a job as early as possible.But, as matter of fact, as the picture described, the people who have learned more earn more than others And,in the picture, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn more XXXX than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.
在这个段落中，最后一句话，我着重引用了一下图片的数据，比较了一下，没写倍数，那东西一不留神就写错，不写！
第二段也还可以写成：现象讨论，即大家对这个事儿看法不一致。有的人觉得这个事儿对什么好，有的人觉得这个事儿对什么坏！写上就好，因为，无论什么事儿，大家的观点都不是一致的哦！第二段第二种如下：
Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not ，as a matter of fact ，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, by this
way,they can earn mare money. However ，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard works.But,most of people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits
以上连个段落，大家根据自己的想法写上一个就好了，可别都写，真
的写不下的！
第三段，其实万古不变，就是个人观点，观点最好是建议或者对策，照着之前给出的三个，随便写写好了：
To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it.And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators ，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.