九年级英语书面表达专题训练二
优秀范文赏析
假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们改为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。
1. 一些同学建议：全班筹钱，为校图书馆买书或者其他东西；
2. 另一些同学建议：无需花钱，好好学习，让学校以我们为荣。
3. 你的想法及理由 „„
导引范文
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that it’s not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us.
In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. We can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do volunteer work to make our school beautiful or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us.
(In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don’t cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so.)
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
顾斯思 九（13）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise some money for school. With the money, we can buy some books or something helpful for our school. As you know, reading books can open up our eyes. And we can improve our writing skills in this way. But other students disagree. They suggest we don’t have to spend money buying things. Trying our best to study hard is enough. After all, study is the most important thing for us. If we do, the school will be proud of us. Isn’t it wonderful?
As for me, I think we can do something helpful for school, such as cleaning the hallways, picking up the litter and so on. I’m sure with the help of us, the school will be more beautiful and cleaner.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
吕玮瑾 九（15）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students suggest the whole class should raise money to buy some books or other things for the library of the school, others think we don’t need to spend any money, we can study as much as possible so that the school can be proud of us. But I think studying hard is a great way that the whole school can take pride in us, and we can also spend no money in it.
In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don’t cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours, Li Ming. 潘昕 九（14）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we should collect money to buy some books for our school library. Besides, we can also buy something else for the school. Other students think that it’s not important to spend money. We can do something
meaningful to make our school take pride in us, such as studying hard, winning medals.
In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. I want to make our school more beautiful and cleaner than before. We can pick up plastic bottles and plant trees with my classmates in the school. Not only do I feel good about helping others, but I just get to spend the time doing what I love to do.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
洪含粟 九（2）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we can raise money for our school. Even a little money is enough. Because it will show our love to our school and we are supposed to buy some useful books and school things for our school library. But other students have different ideas. They say the best gift to our school is to work harder. If we do this, our school will take pride in us because of our success. In my opinion, we can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do some volunteer work to make our school beautiful so that students can have a beautiful school yard to study in.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
黄达 九（16）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students advise all the classmates to raise money, so we can buy many books for the school library or buy other things. However, other students think it is not necessary for us to raise money for our school. They want to study hard and let our school be proud of us.
In my opinion, we can donate books to our school and we should also study hard. Because if I donate books to our school, I will be happy.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
宋娉婷 九（7）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some of my classmates think we should raise money to buy books or other things for our school library, but the rest students don’t agree. They say the most important thing we should do is studying hard and making our school be proud of us.
As for me, I agree with the second suggestion. Because I believe that our success will bring praise to our school, which I s much better than money. So the most important thing we should do is trying our best to study better. I’m sure our school will take pride in us if we do that.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
陈敬畏 九（8）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
On the one hand, some students think we can raise money to buy some books or other things for the school library. On the other hand, other students don’t agree with them. Studying hard and being the credit to the school are agreed by these students.
In my opinion, we are just students and can’t make a living by ourselves. It’s no need to give out our money. Our school has many memories which are cherished in our mind. So, we shouldn’t forget our school. It’s important for us to remember our school wherever we go. That’s the best thing we should do for our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
石婷婷 九（11）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
On the one hand, some students think it is a good idea to raise some money and buy some interesting books or other things for the school library. They think it can help more students open up their minds. However, other students don’ t agree with them. They think working hard is the best way. If we work hard and get good grades, our school will be proud of us.
In my opinion, I think we are just students and we don’t have enough money. So I think we’d better plant trees around our school to make our school cleaner and more beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
丁小鸽 九（12）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise money for the school library to buy some useful books. We can also buy other things with the rest money. However, other students don’t agree with them. They think it isn’t necessary to give away money because we are students and we can’t make a living by ourselves. As students, our duty is to study hard.. If we study hard and get good grades, our school will be proud of us.
I think it’s a good idea to clean the school yard. It’s an easy way to show our thanks to the school and everyone can take part in it.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
陈章霖 九（3）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should try our best to raise money for our school. Because if we do that, the school will have enough money to buy lots of books or something important for the students. And then, the students will get better environment to study. Other students think that we aren’t supposed to raise money. It’s enough to study hard. Then the school will be proud of us because of our good grades.
As for me, I think we should keep the school clean and say thanks to our teachers when we finish middle school. Because the teachers helped us a lot in the past three years. So let’s say thanks to them.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
尹 城 九（4）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some of my classmates think we can raise money to buy some books or some other things for the school library because we read books the school library and get a lot of knowledge from it. And other classmates think studying hard is the only thing we should do, spending money can’t make the school be proud of us unless we study hard. These are enough.
However, I think the best idea is planting trees and flowers in our school. It will make our school clean and beautiful. So more and more children will come to own school to study because of the beautiful and comfortable environment.. Also, we should say “Thank you” to our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
张娅 九（1）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise money for the school library. We can use the money to buy some books that are good for students or something else like basketball and football. However, other students think we are not supposed to
collect money. It’s not necessary to do that. They think the best gift for our school is to study hard because it can make our teachers be proud of us.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to clean the school. We can try our best to keep our school clean and beautiful. Isn’t it meaningful?
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
冯艺璇 九（6）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think our class should raise some money to buy some books or other things for our school. other students have different ideas. They think it’s not necessary for us to raise money. The most important thing is that we should study hard in order to get good grades in the coming exams. Then we can make our school be proud of us.
In my opinion, we can do something useful for our school. For example, we can clean our school. The school is like our home. It’s our duty to make it more comfortable and beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
陈露 九（5）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we can raise money and buy some books or something else for our school library. Then the students in our school can go to the library and read the books. It’s helpful. Others think we don’t have to spend money. Instead, they think we should study hard in order to succeed in the future. Then the school will be proud of us.
In my opinion, it’s not necessary to spend much money buying a lot of things. We can plant trees in the school. Here are my reasons. First, the trees can make our school more beautiful. Second, we can protect the environment in this way. Third, it doesn’t cost much money.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
金晨祎 九（9）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we can raise money to buy something for school. For example, it is a good way to buy books for school library. As we all know, good books make us appreciate the beauty in life.
However, other students think money is not important at all. Our duty is to study hard to become the pride of the school in the future.
In my opinion, not only we should be hard-working, but also we are supposed to get the qualities a person should possess: honesty, kindness, diligence, etc. It is the best gift for our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
谢军 九（10）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise some money to buy some educational books for the school or other things like blackboards, computers and so on. They’re helpful for our school.
But other students had different ideas. They think we needn’t buy anything. They think we must study hard. If we do well in the exams, our school will be proud of us. It’s also important for us to obey the school rules. We could do something to make it cleaner. Of course we can write a letter to the headmaster to give some advice on how to make our school more beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
九年级英语书面表达专题训练二
优秀范文赏析
假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们改为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。
1. 一些同学建议：全班筹钱，为校图书馆买书或者其他东西；
2. 另一些同学建议：无需花钱，好好学习，让学校以我们为荣。
3. 你的想法及理由 „„
导引范文
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that it’s not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us.
In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. We can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do volunteer work to make our school beautiful or try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will be proud of us.
(In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don’t cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so.)
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
顾斯思 九（13）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise some money for school. With the money, we can buy some books or something helpful for our school. As you know, reading books can open up our eyes. And we can improve our writing skills in this way. But other students disagree. They suggest we don’t have to spend money buying things. Trying our best to study hard is enough. After all, study is the most important thing for us. If we do, the school will be proud of us. Isn’t it wonderful?
As for me, I think we can do something helpful for school, such as cleaning the hallways, picking up the litter and so on. I’m sure with the help of us, the school will be more beautiful and cleaner.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
吕玮瑾 九（15）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students suggest the whole class should raise money to buy some books or other things for the library of the school, others think we don’t need to spend any money, we can study as much as possible so that the school can be proud of us. But I think studying hard is a great way that the whole school can take pride in us, and we can also spend no money in it.
In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don’t cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours, Li Ming. 潘昕 九（14）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we should collect money to buy some books for our school library. Besides, we can also buy something else for the school. Other students think that it’s not important to spend money. We can do something
meaningful to make our school take pride in us, such as studying hard, winning medals.
In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. I want to make our school more beautiful and cleaner than before. We can pick up plastic bottles and plant trees with my classmates in the school. Not only do I feel good about helping others, but I just get to spend the time doing what I love to do.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
洪含粟 九（2）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we can raise money for our school. Even a little money is enough. Because it will show our love to our school and we are supposed to buy some useful books and school things for our school library. But other students have different ideas. They say the best gift to our school is to work harder. If we do this, our school will take pride in us because of our success. In my opinion, we can do something meaningful without money. For example, we can do some volunteer work to make our school beautiful so that students can have a beautiful school yard to study in.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
黄达 九（16）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students advise all the classmates to raise money, so we can buy many books for the school library or buy other things. However, other students think it is not necessary for us to raise money for our school. They want to study hard and let our school be proud of us.
In my opinion, we can donate books to our school and we should also study hard. Because if I donate books to our school, I will be happy.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
宋娉婷 九（7）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some of my classmates think we should raise money to buy books or other things for our school library, but the rest students don’t agree. They say the most important thing we should do is studying hard and making our school be proud of us.
As for me, I agree with the second suggestion. Because I believe that our success will bring praise to our school, which I s much better than money. So the most important thing we should do is trying our best to study better. I’m sure our school will take pride in us if we do that.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
陈敬畏 九（8）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
On the one hand, some students think we can raise money to buy some books or other things for the school library. On the other hand, other students don’t agree with them. Studying hard and being the credit to the school are agreed by these students.
In my opinion, we are just students and can’t make a living by ourselves. It’s no need to give out our money. Our school has many memories which are cherished in our mind. So, we shouldn’t forget our school. It’s important for us to remember our school wherever we go. That’s the best thing we should do for our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
石婷婷 九（11）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
On the one hand, some students think it is a good idea to raise some money and buy some interesting books or other things for the school library. They think it can help more students open up their minds. However, other students don’ t agree with them. They think working hard is the best way. If we work hard and get good grades, our school will be proud of us.
In my opinion, I think we are just students and we don’t have enough money. So I think we’d better plant trees around our school to make our school cleaner and more beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
丁小鸽 九（12）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise money for the school library to buy some useful books. We can also buy other things with the rest money. However, other students don’t agree with them. They think it isn’t necessary to give away money because we are students and we can’t make a living by ourselves. As students, our duty is to study hard.. If we study hard and get good grades, our school will be proud of us.
I think it’s a good idea to clean the school yard. It’s an easy way to show our thanks to the school and everyone can take part in it.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
陈章霖 九（3）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should try our best to raise money for our school. Because if we do that, the school will have enough money to buy lots of books or something important for the students. And then, the students will get better environment to study. Other students think that we aren’t supposed to raise money. It’s enough to study hard. Then the school will be proud of us because of our good grades.
As for me, I think we should keep the school clean and say thanks to our teachers when we finish middle school. Because the teachers helped us a lot in the past three years. So let’s say thanks to them.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming.
尹 城 九（4）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some of my classmates think we can raise money to buy some books or some other things for the school library because we read books the school library and get a lot of knowledge from it. And other classmates think studying hard is the only thing we should do, spending money can’t make the school be proud of us unless we study hard. These are enough.
However, I think the best idea is planting trees and flowers in our school. It will make our school clean and beautiful. So more and more children will come to own school to study because of the beautiful and comfortable environment.. Also, we should say “Thank you” to our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
张娅 九（1）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise money for the school library. We can use the money to buy some books that are good for students or something else like basketball and football. However, other students think we are not supposed to
collect money. It’s not necessary to do that. They think the best gift for our school is to study hard because it can make our teachers be proud of us.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to clean the school. We can try our best to keep our school clean and beautiful. Isn’t it meaningful?
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
冯艺璇 九（6）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think our class should raise some money to buy some books or other things for our school. other students have different ideas. They think it’s not necessary for us to raise money. The most important thing is that we should study hard in order to get good grades in the coming exams. Then we can make our school be proud of us.
In my opinion, we can do something useful for our school. For example, we can clean our school. The school is like our home. It’s our duty to make it more comfortable and beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
陈露 九（5）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think that we can raise money and buy some books or something else for our school library. Then the students in our school can go to the library and read the books. It’s helpful. Others think we don’t have to spend money. Instead, they think we should study hard in order to succeed in the future. Then the school will be proud of us.
In my opinion, it’s not necessary to spend much money buying a lot of things. We can plant trees in the school. Here are my reasons. First, the trees can make our school more beautiful. Second, we can protect the environment in this way. Third, it doesn’t cost much money.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
金晨祎 九（9）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we can raise money to buy something for school. For example, it is a good way to buy books for school library. As we all know, good books make us appreciate the beauty in life.
However, other students think money is not important at all. Our duty is to study hard to become the pride of the school in the future.
In my opinion, not only we should be hard-working, but also we are supposed to get the qualities a person should possess: honesty, kindness, diligence, etc. It is the best gift for our school.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min
谢军 九（10）
Dear David,
Last week, we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestions.
Some students think we should raise some money to buy some educational books for the school or other things like blackboards, computers and so on. They’re helpful for our school.
But other students had different ideas. They think we needn’t buy anything. They think we must study hard. If we do well in the exams, our school will be proud of us. It’s also important for us to obey the school rules. We could do something to make it cleaner. Of course we can write a letter to the headmaster to give some advice on how to make our school more beautiful.
I’d like to know your ideas. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Min